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I like this but I have some complaints. I don’t love that it’s in third person. Not terrible but not what I really like for a romance. Why does the MMC continue to call the FMC by her last name? The book is almost over and it just seems odd. Finally, I don’t love the narrator. I feel like her voice is too young for the 29 and 30 year old characters.

I like the writing. Not sure the plot is anything special. Seems like the FMC is perseverating and that's a bit annoying. Her perception of things is absolutely skewed and there's not much rhyme or reason to it. I think this would have been better in dual POV. So far not as good as P.S. I Hate You.

Yes!!!