Meh, story line has good potential but the mc is obnoxious. She is reckless just for reckless sake and seems to have no motive or growth. She is mysteriously good at everything and knows more about magic than the 1000yr old fae partner even though she has had no instruction. With a good editor to help guide this could be an excellent story, but it’d definitely benefit from some restructuring and world building.
— Mar 02, 2023 08:17AM
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