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Underwhelmed so far. The narrative scope seems claustrophobic for a high page count epic. I’d rather not have to track 40+ characters and fortunately in part 1 there are only a few but I’m not captivated by them.

Unsure what it wants to be. Chopped up into multiple parts and interludes. Annoying use of “day month year” e.g. 27 October 1965 which although logically ideal is not what the brain expects from habit: October 27, 1965. Interrupts reading flow.