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I tried to pick books about politics or maths to burn, or those in other languages, or translated into them. Burning a book made me angry because I knew I was setting fire to a world.

Her eye blazed fiercely. “Don’t mock me! You know I speak true. For you, I’d lie and cheat and kill and damn myself straight to hell. I’d do all that and more, again and again and again, as long as it took to ensure you were safe, because you are my twin, my half, my more.”

Ch. 33 - I think I hate this.

Ch. 26 - Thank GAWD something finally happened because if I didn’t get more than MMF tension and traveling I was going to quit.

Ch. 20 - this dialogue is so incredibly cringe.

I am kind of annoyed with this first act twist, even if it is pivotal for the plot.

I need some actual plot to develop or I’m going to abandon ship. Sooo much backstory, so little forward motion.