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Holy crap, this author is amazing

The writing is awful… it reads almost like a terrible video game. Sarah doesn’t know what to do. Sarah one sentence later now knows what to do! Sarah exchanges a few sentences with an NPC and goes off on her new side quest! Sarah hates everyone. Two hours later, Sarah doesn’t know why no one likes her when she is trying! Not sure why I’m going to finish it…

It’s starting to drag now. Unless the ending is spectacular, this could probably be a lot shorter.

I think I’ve seen the movie... the story is very familiar

This is painful... it’s so terribly written and the characters are flat. It feels forced.