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Lyrical

Awesome!

So we begin a little frayed, multiple protagonists sifting through the beginning of their stories. It begins to flow though, and we see the connections beginning to form.

So we begin a little frayed, multiple protagonists sifting through the beginning of their stories. It begins to flow though, and we see the connections beginning to form.

So freaking good!

So the descriptive details got a lot better about 3 pages after my last update, although I'm still bothered that there is no colour descriptive words, I can get the structure of things but the colour I have to fill in myself. I like it, it's very fast paced and not overly deep but a very decent urban paranormal book so far.

So far so good, I love the neighbourhood Golgotham. I do wish there was a little more description of the places, there is some good description of specific story builders like a Skull gate but i am finding the picture in my head a little blurry on the background.

Fast paced but hasn't actually developed the characters just yet.

It's good :)

It's very well written, sometimes these kind of books get bogged down in the world they are trying to describe. This one is a really intriguing story, and it has secondary character development (my favourite)