I'm realizing that part of the problem I'm having in connecting to these characters is actually in the narration. The mmc sounds more like a narrator of a movie (in the sense that they aren't a character but more narrating the events or saying asides) or the voice over guy from movies of the 90s-00s. I think the narration makes sense, but there is also such a split between narration of mmc vs. fmc that it's jarring.
— Jun 03, 2026 06:41AM
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