A bit hard to stay in the story, as Michael's dialogue is rife with we're/were, your/you're, there/their/they're errors and the like. If this is intentional, it's pointless, because these are all approximate homophones. Also, I added this book to Goodreads, only to find the same ASIN and description under a different title:
http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/13...