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It is clearly a sexist world but I can tolerate that because it is from certain character perspectives. It is interesting that this starts as a FANTASY DYSTOPIA when it normally would be a sci-fi dystopia. I am enjoying it though and am curious to read more. It is interesting to see a more classic magic type and world. (pre Sanderson and other modern trends)

I feel like I know Tau. The action is well written, and I am intrigued by the magic system. I wish that the other trainees were more developed. I don't feel like I believe in their relationship with Tau yet. I also can't really differentiate them.

Slow start...