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There’s a part where they talk about how Eddie’s eyes are hazel and not blue even though they’re blue on his baseball card and yet his eyes on the cover are BLUE. Justice for Eddie’s hazel eyes

I have never witnessed this level of miscommunication in my life. How is she deliberately misunderstanding everything he says to her?? He's not even bad at communication, she's just literally hearing things he doesn't say

On page 242 she says she’s never had a guy pull her chair out for her before but on a date with a different guy on page 176, he pulls her chair out for her

This is the first time I can believe Abby Jimenez typed the whole book on her phone

The French in this is real rough

It feels like the author doesn’t think the readers are very smart with the way she explains every tiny thing

It's "give'r" not "giv'r" and it does not mean do a good job, it means to try hard, like to really go for it, give it your all.

Can she please stop referring to him by his full name? It feels super weird

How are they going to fit an entire baking competition into 40 pages??

Why is everyone like “Chris is still chasing after you even though you said you’re dating someone, what a catch”? That seems like a red flag to me

The main character is giving Dave from The Vinyl Café vibes

I can’t believe this book just made me lose the game

I don’t want a love triangle. I hate Sel

I’m kinda struggling with this one. I love Bree and the way the book talks about grief and oppression. But there are so many scenes of Bree being like “wait what???” And then 5 pages of a character explaining something poorly

Her awkwardness is kinda cringey but the chemistry is 💯

I’m really struggling with this one. I don’t feel the chemistry between the characters and the pacing feels glacial. The emotional arcs are all over the place. It feels like it needed another couple of rounds of editing. Fingers crossed it gets better

"I know that any space can be safe until it isn't anymore." (p. 80)

Zane says he’s not a sports guy but didn’t he just say that he loves cricket??

Hello 1950s racism and xenophobia

I really want to try Nigerian food now.
Also Hannah moves on from her negative emotions a little too quickly

I'm a little confused, is it the off-season for football? Why is he not playing? I don't know how sports work