Mmm I thought this was an early series, but it was published in 2018. Half way through book 2: Not sure that I will finish it. Much extraneous description/ ridiculous multitasking which undermines the various scenarios. I’m at the stage where I’m reading a couple of sentences from each paragraph and really don’t need or want the rest. It feels like an inexperienced writer who hasn’t learned that less is more.
— May 03, 2024 03:00PM
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