I love the characters and the storyline. The description of Mr. Whittles was priceless! I think the writing style however, is pretty awful though. Is the author just really good at depicting a simple-minded teenager (not that they're all that way) or is she just. . . bad at writing. I think the main difficulty is that it's written in first person, which sounds like a third-grader wrote it: I did this, I saw this etc.
— Oct 20, 2018 09:26PM
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