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I wish this book flowed better. I still have a hard time following along. But kind of sad it’s take half the book for something to happen

The book has started to get a rhythm, it’s still very hard for me to keep up.
To me it feels like the author has written down conversations that they had in their mind onto paper.

Maybe it’s me, but I find this book so hard to read and follow.

It’s a little rough to stay engaged in the start of this story.
I did not like the introduction that was about 20 pages long. I did not read the intro maybe I should have

I’m not enjoying this read.
I hate the author trying to use internal monologues when she is speaking between Frida and Gabriel
It’s almost as if she can’t finish a thought and moves.
The book seem like the author wants you to create the story by giving you event timeline and an overview of “events” without actually finishing anything

The author I feel is trying to develop one character while wanting you to come to a conclusion about the others without having to develop them herself.

It’s difficult to get behind the writing and the story

The back story is more interesting than what is actually happening in the story. I don’t see the hype in this story.

Different. Having the location be in Utah and cultist makes it feel close to home. But it’s hard to get behind the character at the moment

The antagonist has been found and captured.
Or have they?

Twist twist twist

Building suspense and at this moment the author is attempting to throw suspicion for different routes

Starting off strong. High emotions, lead female seems typical unsure and weak