this writing is just kind of boring and very tilted like for example there’s a sentence where it’s like he did X. He clutched his wrist. You could’ve just wrote the sentence as he did X, clutching his wrist. You know what I mean and especially because I’m listening to the audiobook version it’s a lot more apparent and the audiobook narrator kind of sounds like one of those AI voices.
— Jul 06, 2026 10:44AM
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