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So far, this feels like an uninspired travel diary. Sonia’s endless cycle of flamenco lessons, coffee, and wine is dragging the story down. If this is meant to be buildup, it’s failing. No momentum, & too dull characters to care about. SImple & easy to follow writing, but that’s its only strength. The slow pace sucks the life out of the story, making it a chore to read. I’ll push on, but it's testing my patience.