Description of the H:
"Tall, with broad shoulders nearly ripping the seams from the body-hugging black t-shirt..."
While this would, no doubt, look sexy in a movie, in a book that sort of sentence always has me thinking that the guy could make an effort to buy clothes his actual size, not 2 sizes too small. Instead of thinking "hot!", I think "lazy". That's the difference between a movie and a book.
— Oct 09, 2020 09:38AM
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