My main issue is that the only way the author attributes dialogue is "Blah, blah," he says. ALWAYS after the spoken words and only using the word "says." It must have been used 200 times so far. Never whispers or explains or claims or retorts or lies or mocks or replies or literally anything else. Nope.
"I don't think I can finish this audiobook," I say.
"This repetitive, juvenile style is annoying me," I say.
— Jan 19, 2022 04:57PM
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