If there is one thing this book needed, it was an editor to advise trimming it down by about half. Why did we need 2 full pages of reporters asking questions one after the other? I have spent 211 pages so far wishing only for Graves to get to the point, which was a small issue in book 1, but now it is the reason I am no longer enjoying this story
— Aug 17, 2026 04:51PM
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