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If it's true that this book starts with a decent writing and then as soon as she hit that academy it goes to that wattpad level of juvenile writing it's sadly a sign it will be my tenth DNF of November... woot. But this first chapter is really good, the writing sounds original and polished if it really is going downhill from here is a real bummer

Not interest writiin this anymore. Just too bad writing. Most book s from BOOKTOK now has this horrific juvenile writing whilst trying to convince me that the FMC is strong willed and independent and all that. This book is boring AF as well. Boy bye.

Nope. DNF

Sorry. I can't. Gave up.

DNFed

I'm at zero percent ZERO percent AND there is so much telling in this fooker that I just want to DNF it.
I had this book recommended by at least seven different people. What the actual fk you guys have been reading?
This prose is just rich cousin of any wattpad story, this is bad.
You don't get to stamp ROMANTASY and don't even try to pretend you have DECENT PROSE to do so.
I'm so angry already.

'His eyes flashed, and my insides went wobbly. I’d just excited him. Oh shit.'

Oh myyy .. I'm still reading this ... I can do it ... I can finish it ... because ... I'm not a quitterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

I can do it. I know I can do it. half .. way ... there ....

another chapter another new magic detail hmmmm ... dont abuse the effort I'm making to finish this dulogy

the amount of eeffort Im making not to DNF the fk out of this book. Where you all with your minds to make videos on social media recommending this? Have you no fking shame? Are the stakes so fking low? Yall got lead in your water or smething. Ths is the worst writing I have read ina long time the banter is pretty much me watching my two adolescent nieces talking, this is juvenile in the most perjorative way possible.

audiobook becase there are two narrators so yay but I aint vibing yet I don't trust this author's writing like at all, but it's kinda better so far, it doenst sound like wattpad-ish so bad

The language in this book is WATTPAD level. I'm open minded and all that but, shit gets really uncomfortable when you are trying to understand the scene and the FMC says something like 'fill me with c?m' in what could be an interesting banter at least, but oh well he also said he would fk her mouth to make her shut up. Wooo

Struggling .... strugglinnnnnnnnnnnnnng here ... Welppppppppp

Another book that simply becomes a total different book/story after the first 10 or 20%. What is this I'm reading right now? How dare you captivate me with interesting story and plot and then turn this into New Adult erotica with bad writing? What about the words Cck and Cnt in every other paragraph. Is this really NEW ADULT? What is this book. Welllllpppppp!

what i hate the most about this book is that I know something will happen at the ninety nine mark that will make me hate myself for not DNFing this at thirty percent

i cant believe i survived this book what a horrible installment

now I understand why some ppl dont liek the love triangle trope it takes a lot of effort and planning fro the autnor to make the FMC sound in doubt and torn rather than a fucking gullible unbearable whiny -- Im not using the B word -- but goodness gracious this FMC is infuriating in the most literal sense, and you who recommended this book to me I'll find youuuuuuuuu

This book is so uninteresting m gawd who cares about this regan person and this other Florence person. So annoying. The main couple kinda got their way and became a bit interesting in book two but THIS book so annoying and lots and lots of NOTHINGHAPPENING-ness ... my patience!

At 10% this book had me kicking my feet like I was convinced this was finally my book of 2026.
At 30% everything started getting way too repetitive.
Around 40% she is literally telling one guy 'you like me, confess', then two pages or so later 'you are jealous, but this is wrong, please ignore this, yadayada.
Now, at 50% I just want to effing DNF.

Why is this book popular. This forty year old dude is pathetic.The comments he makes about the heroine. Did you WHO RATED THIS FIVE STARS find it cute when she was working for him at the bar and he sent her to deal with 'difficult' customers to change her mind about keeping the job. And the difficult customers consisted of fucking GROPERS?

I think I'm taking a break from this. There is a lot of nothing happening here and background story becoming kinda heavy loaded. Boring writing and boring start. I really don't want to DNF this, but for the love of all the Goddesses of fairy tales why WHYYY do I keep reading books that are popular on BookTok and BookTagram.