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The opening story "Because we must begin somewhere" feels weak and rushed. The narrator keeps referring to the protagonist Johnny as an idiot, yet nothing is shown as to what makes him an idiot. The narrator implies that being friendly makes him an idiot. There are many things that can make someone an idiot and being friendly is not one of them. Who is Johnny? Why should we as readers appreciate him?

The opening story "Because we must begin somewhere" feels weak and rushed. The narrator keeps referring to the protagonist Johnny as an idiot, yet nothing is shown as to what makes him an idiot. The narrator implies that being friendly makes him an idiot. There are many things that can make someone an idiot and being friendly is not one of them. Who is Johnny? Why should we as readers appreciate him?

great shit :D

Sasha is just so real and funny.

I just finished Carl R. Moore's "As Blood Runs the Night." It's so nice and sweet. The ending made me wanna cry :'(

I'm in Armand Rosamilia's story now.

I'm at Ralph Greco Jr's Turning Tightly. His story is a little confusing. I think he should have gotten a little more in depth with the narrator's thoughts. I feel his narrator is a little vague and unclear.