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We don’t squash thoughts; we quash them.

I’m loving this book, but the typos are getting out of hand. “The moment stretched between them, taught as a bowstring.”

Ummmmm, do you mean ”taut as a bowstring”? I think you do.

I hope the author got a kickback for the Tylenol product placement. Page 47, and it’s already been mentioned three times.

She is a small, brown-haired.

That’s it. That’s a sentence.

Without a spoiler, let’s just say that’s one tiny hill to roll down.

goodwill is a proper noun: Goodwill.

I am literally on page 3: Riley pours milk into an empty jar. ‘Drink,’ Riley says. Oliver tips the gallon jug to his mouth.

Then what happened to the empty jar? Maybe Riley used it? Nope. Page 4 has her also drinking from the jug.