This reads like fanfiction and I don't know if that's just how the author writes, or if it's a conscious decision. I hope it is just her intentionally making it like that, because it would be genius considering the theme.
Also every sentence feels like she skipped through a thesaurus lmao, there's so many unnecessarily complex words in situations where they're really not needed. It's kind of funny.
— Nov 14, 2024 01:47PM
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