This is really hit and miss lol. So far I enjoyed the stories Bright Day, Trick of the Light, and The Wanting. The others were okay, but Trick of the Light was really bad tbh. Too much would, could, had, should, flashbacks back and forth in time, and sentence fragments. It read as a rough draft. At least I know I could be published haha
— Jun 26, 2026 08:54PM
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