I'm enjoying this so far, but, do we really need all of these details? And for the mc to tell us the exact reasoning for each little irrelevant action? Did she really need to tell the reader that she was putting her leftovers in the fridge AND tell us the reason why she chose to put them in the fridge? (To keep the leftovers from going bad-- I know, shocking!)
— Jul 22, 2024 09:19PM
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