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I returned this book. While the story line was interesting the poor (no) editing made it impossible to read. Wrong tense, in some cases using the wrong character name in the same paragraph! Awful - too bad, maybe a clean up would help.

Excellent Book! However, she should pay a proof reader. Lot of wrong words (for example "done" when it should have read "down") The bridge book to the one she is working on to release this year was worse - 3 times errors like that within a page & a half!