A good read, but it prompts me to ask why authors, even good ones, insert these two clichés into bloody everything? “He smiled, showing his large, perfect, and even white teeth.” “A long-suffering sigh as he ran his hand over his smooth head.” I have never seen anyone, especially a guy, run their fingers over their head or through their hair when stressed or thoughtful. I just haven’t. Change my mind.
— Apr 22, 2021 07:12AM
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