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Monica is 25% done with You Shouldn't Have Come Here
Terrible! Flat, shallow characters. So far, it seems as if I’m reading a script for a Halloween Hallmark movie. A quarter of the way in and I’m already sick of biting lower lips, blue blue eyes, and fluttering lashes.
May 21, 2024 08:07PM Add a comment
You Shouldn't Have Come Here

Monica
Monica is 64% done with Rules Of Prey (Lucas Davenport, #1)
It just went to far. The manipulative girlfriend of the unlikable protagonist is pregnant and still drinking beer. No one sees a problem with this? And damn it, Texas is not in the Southwest!! If Arkansas was ruled out due to accent then so would Texas. Both states have the same southern dialect. Geez.
May 09, 2020 06:05PM Add a comment
Rules Of Prey (Lucas Davenport, #1)

Monica
Monica is 55% done with Rules Of Prey (Lucas Davenport, #1)
Very poor character development childish dialogue. Spent several lines describing people in the first chapter that are completely irrelevant to the book.

Very good storyline.

Unintentionally made the good guy very unlikable.

Texas is NOT in the Southwest. It is the South. The accents are not the same either.

How do potatoes make someone look old?
May 09, 2020 04:21PM Add a comment
Rules Of Prey (Lucas Davenport, #1)

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