I’ve always preached that the difference between a good writer and an average writer is in their transitions. The last page of the first chapter, Mankins goes something along the lines of “And as the armed guerrilla were taking my husband away, I thought back to when we first moved to Panama.”
[insert Michael Scott screaming “God, please no” at Toby]
— Jun 19, 2023 08:14AM
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