I already have so many issues with this one, this is a bad sign lol
Why does the 8 year old know the word “impatient” with no explanation but “frazzled” is a word that “Daddo” uses to describe “Mommy. And why are we using “Daddo” to refer to the dad??? This shit is gonna drive me insane.
The narration also don’t read like am 8-year-old, it’s too mature given the simplistic dialogue
— Aug 29, 2026 04:10PM
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