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Really readable, good moments, dialogue is great, but feel like everyone is just farting around now. Tired of the same locations. I enjoy the subdued sexual tension, even if it’s just a little bland.

not really connecting to the characters. why is the nearly forty year old absentee father setting shit on fire? it’s refreshing to see the accuracy of a hero and his bad decisions without much forethought though, but you might throw in an STD while you’re at it. heroine is… there. does stuff. I think my girl Rosalyn and the dead guy Henry are more interesting by far.