I’m gonna try to be as fair as possible. But let me say that telling readers that their reading comprehension isn’t on par is probably not the best way to win friends and influence people.
Also, I’m gonna go ahead and say that this doesn’t bode well: “He kicked in the door, revealing a narrow, torch-lit stairwell. He sent me a wild grin that caused my breath to catch because it reminded me of…of him.”
— Mar 16, 2022 08:56AM
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