Natasha Brown > Recent Status Updates

And then she leaves even though she just shot a guy in a foreign country where she isn’t allowed to have a weapon! “Kyle can explain.” Ridiculous.

Omg. She shot his fun out of his hand. Hahahaha

She searches her feelings on every damn page.

Is she falling for him? I have no idea why. He is an asshat

If one more person has to tell this person she is pretty, I’m going to throw my kindle. Inconsistent character development here. I wouldn’t let this woman watch my dog.

And I’m still waiting to see anything. It’s like reading a news story. All telling no showing, no feeling, nothing.

This chic. She can kick ass in hand to hand and an excellent marksman or so I am told over and over again. She literally is entrusted with people’s lives, yet she stands in front of the mirror bemoaning her small boobs and derrière. Worries if the guy she just met who is acting like an asshat will like her body. She is unsure of what to order in a restaurant. She acts like a teenage girl.

Also, every sentence is laced with unnecessary descriptions.our heroine went jogging with a blue and red headband and that is “the only semblance of individuality” the rest of her jogging outfit being black and nondescript. why do I need to know this. Why do I need to know that she is slim and athletic and runs with swift and graceful strides. I don’t need to know all of this on the first paragraph.