sarah j mass is obviously a very talented writer - but her talent is wasted here. her world building is good, her language is good her characters are good her plot building is incredible, but her stuff reads like wattpad / fanfiction. if your protagonist is beautiful, lives in a flat with her bff, has multiple men chasing her in the first 50 pages and is witty and popular unfortunately it’s just not realistic.
— Feb 06, 2025 08:25PM
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