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Y'know what rereading the scene it makes the most sense for the story to leave it as is. Making it this whole melodramatic thing would be out of character.

adding to my previous update, it doesn't bother me too much and it makes sense with everything going on that they would agree silently to move on but like still idk I need to process

I fucking love this right now, my one big complaint for the time being is the scene where Toni yells at Oliver (if you know you know), like are we gonna apologize or talk about it or is the awkward drunk arm pat the closest thing to an apology we're getting. Like it is in character for everyone to leave it at that but it feels wrong to not mention it again, welp I will see.

PEAK FLUFF

I love it so camp and so goofy. I don't have an amazing grasp on the MC yet to be honest other than that he's nice, hopefully that changes :)

I like it so far, there is still way too much usage of "despite myself" and the book loves over explaining what I literally just read the chapter before. But to my knowledge this wasn't a serial and was published as one novel so I'm kind of confused on that part. It gets points tho for its pacing and the lovely lesbianism. Plus I love that Sorawaro is genuinely awkward and not just "quirky"

I don't get scared easily, especially from books, so it feels more right now like a dark sci-fi and not a horror novel but i'll see. I get more scared from like slow burn atmosphere stuff and not body horror althought I appreciate it.

Very enjoyable so far but the prose is a bit bland and the term "despite myself" has been said way too many times. I will give it the benefit of the doubt for now however because it is translated from another language. Plus horror yuri!

WTF IS HAPPENING?? (I love it tho)