Nice concept but zero characterisation (so far?) and it's very tell, tell, telling. I'm really only at 16% because the story doesn't start until 10% (the first 10% is ToC, Author intro, and other such information that usually sits at the back of a book. I couldn't try Look Inside or a sample first because the story starts after the 10% cut-off. I'm going to try another chapter to see if it gets any better.
— Oct 17, 2020 03:59PM
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