Part 1 finished, and so far boo, another example of why men are terrible at writing female characters. Why are you describing the English teachers boobs? The dated references of how these teenage girls talk and act are all over the place, and just horrifying of the male behaviour that they're accepting . I have a lot to say and most of it is negative. Don't know how much of it I'll get through before I DNF
— Oct 15, 2025 03:03AM
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