First and second act was decent. This third act is absolutely killing me. Everyone and every event has become a Pronoun: "Peter was a Little . . .books the Builders had left behind . . .sometimes Teacher . . .returned from the Last Long Ride . . .killed in the Darklands. You get the picture. Did these people turn into Native Americans?!
— May 15, 2012 09:07PM
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