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These last 120 pages have been part of “part 2” of this novel and it is excellent. I’m finally really rooting for our MC. I’m loving this section of the novel and so many questions I had are getting answered 👌

This is a weird story

Almost 100 pages in and completely engrossed in the story

This story has totally grown on me, so has Jason and all his quirks

The writing is.. far from perfect. But the magic system and world are really interesting.

To begin with I had a tough time with the MC, he’s rough around the edges, very on the nose, and has this odd tendency to over explain himself and what he’s feeling in random moments.