Late night reading thoughts: I am uncomfortable with how often Harry inserts himself as a third wheel to this marriage.
Also, Persephone’s and Adam’s behavior is unpredictable and erratic. One moment they are waxing poet about how “deucedly” puzzled they are about how they find themselves caring for one another, then the next they are snapping at someone.
Ugh, this whole plot is aimless…
— Jan 21, 2026 10:54PM
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