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Humanity and art vs machine and its imitation of it

Shroud revealed- confused until narrator explained, which felt like a portent of the dangers of AI machines ahead of its time

As the pace is hitting maximum Mach, I am getting a Matrix-esque element to it. What you believe is what you make real in the shroud

I don't like insta love.
The MMC is too perfect. I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop.
I am not sure what direction the book is going, but I hope it gets more complicated than this.

Lydia Bennet mention

I feel like it's focusing excessively on the romance.

The levels of yearning in this book so far is criminal!