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Ugh girls not supporting girls (when a girl has been a victim). Girls like that can well & truly jog on.

Should probably have expected a trauma curveball.
I guess it's a bit different to have:
- The love interest
- The guy who likes her but is good about not being with her
- The guy who (to put things incredibly lightly) is a dick about not 'getting the girl' (tw: sexual assault, violence towards women)

This book really isn't what I expected from the blurb to be honest so far & I'm not sure why, but I'm not really into the whole 'girl who has so many guys after her trope'. Like it's not even just a love triangle, and how many teenagers have 3 guys after them at once? Idk, just a bit stereotypical.

Another you're instead of your! I can get past some of the other errors but this one is really bugging me with it's frequency for such a short book. I've read less popular self published books with far better editing.

Add a there instead of their

Another you're instead of your - this book definitely needed more proofreading.

I am aware this is self-published but the number of typos in this so far, I really think it needed more editing. We've just had a 'you're' instead of 'your' & have had multiple times when words are missing in sentences. It does detract from the reading experience.

Its already horrifying

I don't even know... Seriously?

Scared to finish last 25 pages or so... in case ends on cliffhanger. I can't do this... is it good? Give me faith people, HELP. What shall I do?