Compelling story. I have some issues with the narrative; namely, I hate the main character. He’s pompous, all women are in love with him, and while he runs into obstacles, he moves through every one with his amAZING intelligence and skill. I would have enjoyed it a little more if it weren’t in first person. No 15 year talks or acts like this. Or any human, for that matter. Other than that, I loved it!
— Dec 17, 2022 10:58AM
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