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AgentScully is on page 100 of 288

falling kinda flat now - gothic atmosphere has dissipated rapidly, servants too nice and accepting (where's Mrs Danvers when you need her?), mysterious disappeared H has reappeared too soon and is scarcely mysterious since we're privy to his every burbling thought, story badly needs a villain on-page

— Sep 04, 2022 09:32PM

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AgentScully is finished

3 1/2* rounded up, despite my snark it got more lively near the end, and I like to encourage newer authors to try different things

also was this actually marketed as a gothic? I feel part of my earlier disappointment was that it wasn't measuring up as a gothic read but was it actually sold as one?

— Sep 07, 2022 01:30PM

AgentScully is on page 260 of 288

villain has shown up with his strawberry blonde curls and he wants his favorite toy back dammit

— Sep 07, 2022 12:48AM

AgentScully is on page 190 of 288

screwed and tattoo'd h and her family of ~~mice~~ servants are starting to bore me - and what's with Hal? depression? insanity? I've read it twice and still can't figure it out

— Sep 05, 2022 05:52PM