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Jessica
is 50% done
Starting to drag a bit. Parts of this could have been edited as there is a lot of repetition at the moment. If you’ve connected with the character, I’m not sure the repulsion is needed. If you haven’t connected with the protagonist by now, not sure why you’re at 50%!
— Sep 08, 2024 10:44AM
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Jessica
is 87% done
She does a really great job writing as a first person POV and a young kid at that. I wasn’t keen on the football section of the book though I understood it to be one part success though yet another failure
— Sep 12, 2024 08:46PM
Jessica
is 27% done
Excellent writing style and from a perspective for a male tween! I’m at the point where he’s gone to stay at the McCobb’s. I see the movement in homes is associated with significant changes in life.
— Sep 06, 2024 04:06PM
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Sep 08, 2024 10:45AM
* Repetition not repulsion
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