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August 24, 2023

The Plan…Part 2

The New Angel series groups. I wrote BykeChic because I had a funky dream about Kita and Transformers. When I started, it wasn’t going to be part of the Kitaverse. That’s one of the reasons Little Kita (human Kita) is so different. She wasn’t supposed to be Angel Kita. I was only using the name for familiarity. When I got to decide what the axiom did and how it worked, I debated what to do. I don’t think I made up my mind until I said the axiom was the shape of a feather. Even then, I didn’t plan on Kita being an Angel. After daydreaming about it for a while, I decided I would, and then I had to find a way to get Kita there. I did make her kinder and gentler in an attempt to get away from Game of the Gods Kita. This didn’t lead to the stories I wanted. Earth 832 and Earths are both good stories but aren’t really Kita books in my mind.

The first book in the Earth Y4K series, Blood, Oil, and Tears, is an outlier. It’s from Kimmy’s point of view and follows in the same character vein for Kita as the New Angel series. Titan’s Forge and Heat Death are not. They are pure, old-school Li’ve Kita rampaging across the galaxy, destroying everything, and leaving a trail of bodies books. Kita gains new powers in Earth Y4K, and she uses them to devastating effect.

Earth Y4K introduces a first. A male Kita can stand to have close. Johnny Henry JR commands the Black Griffin Merc Company, is married and madly in love with the Djinn Sierra, and he looks like John Cena, just with a black beard. He also has a thing for pirates.

Jonny and Sierra are one of the few groups that take Kita and Kimmy at their word that they’re gods and can help save the galaxy. Along the way, Sierra becomes Kita’s best friend and the Angel Heretic. Jonny and Sierra quickly earned Kita’s trust by letting her do her thing and not being bothered by Kita’s antics. He does become the Angel Blackbeard but doesn’t get wings, just a bear butt.

Jonny was a request for a prominent male character. There hasn’t been one since Ryan, and he’s not a favorite. It was a trick to come up with a character that was safe for Kita, could prove worth to her, and be her contemporary. He has no nefarious intentions and is loyal to Kita for trying to save their galaxy and taking them to Roost. And if he has a male moment, Senior is there to knock sense back into him.

CAVEGIRL is much like BykeChic. It follows a version of Little Kita through the last ice age for most of the story, then Kita finds her axiom and becomes an Angel. Kita is also raging in this story, but it’s driven by her PTSD. The plot of CAVEGIRL is to put Darkness back on the vampire throne and defeat Anna’s vampires sent to enslave the world. Kita’s relationships expand. She falls for Darkness as Little Kita, Kerri returns, and Kita and Kimmy are trying to rebuild their relationship after Earth Y4K. It’s a grand fantasy adventure across a unique landscape, meeting new races. Wait until you meet a three-foot Elf Angel.

So where is NAEC going? After CAVEGIRL will be BLOODLINES. BL is a collection of short stories chronicling Jynx as a Marine and her and Kita’s relationship. After that will be the GOD STONES. If you remember, a few short stories I published long ago contained things known as god stones. Originally, they were pieces left over from the previous equation and could take god powers. Now, they are the singularity of each of the five fundamental forces. They are what the universe was formed from, and they float in the universe. When put together, they destroy the universe. Kita and the K Squad are pulled from the universe moments before it implodes. Ryan has frozen the universe because most of the other Angels are in it, and they’re afraid they’ll be deleted. Kita turns to finding old Angels to help save the new Angels.

I don’t know what will happen after GOD STONES. See what I dream up.

So, what’s the GOAL? As Kita says, the goal of making all these universes is to get back to EARTH ZERO, Kasey, Katalina, Sarge, and the other Angels. Kita still has a grudge against Collector and Katalina. I plan on taking Kita back to her home world Heliox and see what’s happened. Possible bad guys are Tina and her desire to create a utopia, and I see Sarin becoming a Lex Luthor-type with Gjord Industries. So, the goal is to get back to the beginning. Kita keeps Earths she likes orbiting around Roost and so Angels from those Earths can go home. Expect some adventures on Earth 832 and 900 and the Korra Alliance.

That’s the five-year plan. 😀 If you have a question, comment, or suggestion, please let me know. Ya’ll make great suggestions that make the story better.

***ANNOUNCEMENT***

CAVEGIRL is now available on Patreon, FallenAngelKita.com, and Amazon Vella! Click on the shop tab, and you can purchase a season pass or part ten bundles. It’s also available from the Patreon Shop, MY BOOKSTORE or Kindle Vella.

Earth Y4K: Blood, Oil, and Tears audiobook is available! Message me if you want a review copy.

US: https://www.audible.com/…/Earth-Y4K-Blood…/B0CCG3JWH6

UK: https://www.audible.co.uk/…/Earth-Y4K-Blood…/B0CCFYL1YD

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Published on August 24, 2023 09:06

New CAVEGIRL Parts Released

Ten new CAVEIGRL parts are now available. Get them in the BOOKSTORE.

If you haven’t looked at the Fallen Angel Kita Patreon page lately, I’ve added a shop. Currently, it only allows digital sales, which is perfect for me…except for the $3 minimum. To work around this, I’m doubling up on the number of parts released. If you bought the first ten parts, I’ll send you the next ten.

DON’T MISS ANYTHING! There is a Season Pass available for $25 that will get you all 165 parts and save you $7.

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Published on August 24, 2023 09:01

August 16, 2023

The Plan…Part 1

I was chatting with a fan/reader/patron and they asked me to explain how Ascension ties in with Game of the Gods and the New Angels/Earth Y4K/CAVEGIRL (NAEC). They’d read the original manuscripts (Find them at https://discord.com/channels/696557556553875556/711401597753622610) but didn’t get how they fit with NAEC. This is a good question, and so far, the answer has probably only made sense to me.

In the original manuscript progression, it went Ascension, Return of the Fallen Angel, Children of the Emperor, Irruption, and Game of the Gods. This would complete the story arc of how Kita became God. And that’s where it was supposed to stop. When I went to publish, I combined Ascension, Return of the Fallen Angel, and Children of the Emperor into one series. This was done for a couple of reasons. Those three series are one story arc of Kita vs. Angus. The first three published Ascension books are the same as the original manuscripts, with some tweaks.  Return is where I started to rewrite. The rewrite wasn’t so much making a new story as taking the disjointed and incomplete story that was Return of the Fallen Angel and making it flow, coherent and complete. 

If you’ve read Return of the Fallen Angel and the new Ascension, you’ll find 90% is the same, just polished. The biggest change is the introduction of Babydoll (Kerri) in Price of Glory. Before, she wasn’t introduced until Irruption. It was decided that Babydoll being a high-ranking legionnaire, would have been noticed by Kita went she took over the Legion. Kita and Babydoll as best friends has been expanded to a relationship taking place between Kita’s relationship with Snowy and Sarin. Kita and Babydoll will span time and space. Sarin will still happen in pretty much the same fashion. She’ll help Kita raise Spike and Quill. The events in Children of the Emperor will see the most rewriting in the new Ascension. I remember it being very disjointed, incomplete, and missing elements. 

Irruption will become Empire of Angels. I haven’t thought much about what needs to happen with this story. The original manuscripts for Irruption are in good shape. I’ve got some changes, like not having Kita run off twice in four chapters. EoA will link Ascension and Game of the Gods.

Game of the Gods is published but needs a rewrite, but I’m not going to do it….except for parts of Li’ve…until I’ve finished EoA. For the most part, the story and characters of Game of the Gods are good. There are a bunch of continuity errors, and background information has changed. The end of Li’ve will change, well a detail. A big detail. Currently, Kita destroys the Infinity Reality over Sarin. That’ll change. Kita will destroy the Infinity Reality over the loss of Kasey Bush, AKA Defiance. Sarin and Kita will be together for a long time, but Kita desperately wants Kasey. She wants Babydoll, too, but she turned Kita down when asked to partner. If you’ve read Incompatablitly or CATHOUSE you’ve gotten a hint of Kita’s relationships with Apacolypse, Babydoll, and Darkness. In the WHAT IF Reunion, you can see where Sarin fits in or doesn’t.

Death vs. Deletion. This is a concept that causes a lot of confussion. In the Infinity Universes (GotG) ceasing of existing can happen in one of three ways. Killed. If an Angel is killed, say Snowy on the transfer station in Li’ve. Her equation has stopped but her data (Spirit?) is still stored in the universe’s memory. In CATHOUSE Ryan and others find Snowy’s data (Spirit) and copy it into Kita’s Reality. With deletion, when the Angel is killed by deletion, like Defiance, her data (spirit) is removed from the universe’s memory. It was like she never existed. Finding these Angels will require searching other parts of Kita’s Computer. Kerri was found storied in temperary memory. The problem is, no one knows when these caches and memory stores will be overwritten. So, there’s some urgancy. Truncation. This is what Kita did to Tina. It’s not evident in GotG’s or the other books how much Kita hates Tina. When an equation is truncated, it stops and hangs in limbo between life and death. Forever waiting to be processed but never will.

Continued in Part 2 next week

***ANNOUNCEMENT***

CAVEGIRL is now available on Patreon! Click on the shop tab and you can purchase a season pass or part ten bundles. It’s also available from MY BOOKSTORE or Kindle Vella.

Earth Y4K: Blood, Oil, and Tears audiobook is available! Message me if you want a review copy.

US: https://www.audible.com/…/Earth-Y4K-Blood…/B0CCG3JWH6

UK: https://www.audible.co.uk/…/Earth-Y4K-Blood…/B0CCFYL1YD

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Published on August 16, 2023 09:49

August 3, 2023

NEW RELEASE: BLOOD, OIL, and TEARS

EARTH Y4K: BLOOD, OIL, and TEARS Audiobook is now available on Audible.com!

US: https://www.audible.com/…/Earth-Y4K-Blood…/B0CCG3JWH6

UK: https://www.audible.co.uk/…/Earth-Y4K-Blood…/B0CCFYL1YD

Sometimes Gods Make a Mistake

The gods Kimmy and Kita wanted to explore the far future they created and pilot military robot mechs as mortals. They never expected to find a hellish, xenophobic galaxy. When their daughter is taken, they’ll do anything to get her back.

A Prayer is Answered

Newfound friends join Kimmy and Kita to save the galaxy. When Kita’s gravely injured, Kimmy and friends search for ancient weapons caches to raise an army. But they’re not the only ones searching. Ruthless galactic governments will stop at nothing to defeat Kimmy.

An Ancient God Awakens

Kimmy discovers the only way to save Chelsea and defeat an evil galaxy is to unleash Kita, the God of Evil. Together, they must rampage across the galaxy to bring peace, liberty, and equality – but at what cost?

If you enjoyed the thrilling sci-fi adventure of Ready Player One and MechWarrior/Battletech, you’ll love Blood, Oil, and Tears. Buy now and join Kimmy on her quest to save the galaxy! Book 2, Titan’s Forge, is coming end of 2023. The conclusion, Book 3, Heat Death, arrives Spring of 2024.

Want a free copy in exchange for a review? DM, and I’ll send you a code.

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Published on August 03, 2023 11:02

NEW RELEASE: CAVEGIRL

CAVEGIRL, the epic Lord of the Rings-type adventure across primitive N. America, is now available on Kindle Vella or direct!

US ONLY Vella: https://www.amazon.com/kindle-vella/story/B0CD14DBCK

US and GLOBAL: https://fallenangelkita.com/kitas-bookstore/

An epic sapphic love tale, in a Lord of the Rings-style journey across primitive North America to restore the dethroned Vampire Nocturni Queen. Keett and Kimba are determined to thrive in the wilderness. When they discover cave paintings of fantastical vampire-like creatures they’re attacked and Kimba taken. Keett is determined to save her friend and strikes out to find their layer. She discovers a beautiful vampire willing to give Keett the knowledge she craves in exchange for help and Keett’s heart.

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Published on August 03, 2023 10:59

March 2, 2023

March’s Story is Now Available on Patreon

See what might happen if Kita returns to Earth Zero and reunites with Sarin and Defiance. LINK

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Published on March 02, 2023 13:57

February 14, 2023

Want a FREE Audiobook?

The Razor’s Pass audiobook is finished, and I’m giving free copies to all my patrons. Sign up now, and I’ll send you a copy!

CLICK HERE TO GET YOUR AUDIOBOOK

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Published on February 14, 2023 17:37

February 3, 2023

February 2, 2023

Kita Chat February 8th 3 PM EST

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Published on February 02, 2023 10:48

January 11, 2023