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June 14, 2021

Upcoming Book Announcement

I have finished The Coup Trilogy and the third book is up for pre-sale (well the ebook is, they don't appear to allow me to pre-sell the paperbacks.)

Rising From the Ashes

I want to talk a bit about The Coup and what I was intending when I wrote it.

It started out as a little thing, as so many things do. Just a 500-word fan fic for a little known (at the time) TV show called Firefly. Then, that expanded to 2500 words.

By the end of it I had a novel idea, but I didn't want to spend time writing a novel that couldn't be published. So I changed the universe to my own, and the story evolved from my original conception.

I started to write, but I was working full-time and somehow it was hard to find the time to concentrate. That was in 2003. In 2018, I retired and decided I would finish it. I published the first book in 2020.

As I wrote, I realized I had three books. Book one would be the origin story. How the war came to happen. Book two would be the story of the war itself. And book three would be the aftermath. Most people only do a chapter or two on aftermath, if they write about it at all. But my background makes me especially interested in aftermath, so it got a whole book. Little did I realize how difficult that might be. It wasn't that I didn't have plenty to say; but aftermaths are messy, they don't follow the regular story structure. Instead of coming together to deal with a major event, they split apart to take up their lives again. The third book turned out to be the most difficult to write.

The whole series is epic in scope. It wasn’t intended to be. But the story wants to be what the story wants to be. One of the many lessons I have learned while writing this. And I have always been a complex thinker. I suppose it shouldn’t have been so much of a surprise that I would want to tell a complex story.

I could have written this as straight up action adventure with epic space battle after epic space battle. It would have been a much shorter story. Maybe even one book. But I find those stories tedious and dull. I needed more.

So it evolved into a study of the personal impact of war. That seems an odd choice for subject matter for someone who didn't serve inn the military. But my father was a doctor in a MASH unit in Korea and the love of my life was a retired Naval Officer who served in Vietnam. Almost all of my childhood friends had fathers who had served and mothers who had dealt with World War II on the homefront. My whole generation was born in aftermath. I also worked for the military as a civilian analyst, and, probably most critical, I grew up on the grounds of a VA hospital where I saw the aftermath of war every day.

And while my subject matter sounds a bit gloomy, in the end, it is a story about hope and resilience. Along the way, we encounter heroism, grief, love, teenage angst, laughter, and surprises. Some characters make terrible mistakes. And everybody grows and changes in different ways, even the artificial intelligences and aliens.

It’s not a safe universe. But if the last year has taught us anything, it is that the universe is not safe. It never has been. We just occasionally get a chance to ignore that for a little while.

We all have favorite characters and authors are no exception. My favorite character is Garret which is surprising since we first encounter him in To the Bitter End doing something stupid. His mistake has an impact far beyond what he could have imagined. His arc is about how he recovers from that mistake and learns as he grows up. Gelb is another favorite character, so much so that he is going to get his own book. An alien exiled from his people for, as he puts it, the crime of being different, Gelb is, like so many of us, looking to find a family when he didn't fit in at home.

My favorite moment is a very human one. A couple separated by the war manages to meet up for the first time in years while both their ships are being repaired. They take a vacation, the first one ever for their children. Just an ordinary, loving family where the parents are trans. I choose a trans couple for this part of the story because I know trans people, and they want what most people want. Ordinary lives. They want love, family, and friends; have ambitions and hopes and dreams. Just like everyone else. So much of what is written about them seems to forget this. They are too often demonized, but they are not demons. They feel the same sadness at the separation due to the war, the same fears that the military person might get hurt or die, the same regret that their children don't know their father as well as they would in ordinary times. And the same joy at a moment of reunion.

There are people who will be mad about this. Why can't I write a regular cis couple instead, why do I have to be so politically correct? But I write it because there are billions of stories about cis couples and trans couple exist and deserve to have positive stories told as well. Stories that only include cis white Christians are the politically correct ones. Other people exist and it is not right to erase them so you can stay comfortable in your bubble. They say to write about what you know. I’m not trans, but I have felt invisible and erased. I have been demonized (not as much or in exactly the same way as a trans person). I write from a feeling of empathy, from knowing that all kinds of people need to show up in stories because they exist in real life. I think of some books which hit me like a ton of bricks because I finally felt seen and how important that was to me. I hope someday someone will read one of my books and say, “Yes. She gets me.”

Hopefully, some of this will have sparked your interest in my trilogy. If you haven't read the earlier books, you can find them here:

The Coup Series
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Published on June 14, 2021 13:15 Tags: alineinthesand, risingfromtheashes, sciencefiction, spaceopera, thecoup, tothebitterend

March 12, 2021

I was interviewed

I know I'm not a best-selling author who is a household name, but getting interviewed for a podcast made me feel like one. It was so much fun to talk books. Links are below.

https://www.discoveredwordsmiths.com/...

https://www.discoveredwordsmiths.com/...

The pod cast is also on Spotify. Look s=for DescoveredWordsmiths. And check out his other interviews. He was a a good interviewer asking interesting questions. So give him some love, too.
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January 19, 2021

ProWritingAid Interview

This month I am one of the featured writers for ProWritingAid. I use this software to do the final polishing on my books and I highly recommend it.


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November 21, 2020

Science Fiction Reading List

It’s that time of year when many people are setting reading goals and looking for reading lists to expand their usual fare. If you are looking to read more science fiction or if you are using a reading list that asks you to read one science fiction novel and you don't know what to choose, I have made this list.

In my experience, often when people think of science fiction, they think of a narrow idea that they got from one or two books or movies. If they didn't like the first thing they were exposed to, they tend to dismiss the whole genre as bad. But science fiction is much broader than most people think. So let’s look at the various themes and some recommended reading to try in the different themes. Note that many books in science fiction have multiple themes. Many of the books listed are the first book or a series (occasionally a later book if the series as a whole doesn't fit the category).

Space opera - This is what many people think about when they think science fiction. It’s all about space ships, right? Space opera is the fun area of the field, it’s all about the adventure. Sure it is usually involving trips by space ship, but the real key is the adventure.. Star Wars is Space Opera, so are Firefly, Farscape, both versions of Battlestar Galactica and Star Trek. Since it is so common in movies and film, it is the most widely known type. There are plenty of books that are considered Space Opera, too.
 Have Spaceship Will Travel - Robert Heinlein
 Quarter Share - Nathan Lowell
 A Long Way to A Small Angry Planet - Becky Chambers
 Hunter of Worlds - C J Cherryh

Romance - Romance novelists sometimes set their books in space.
 Accidental Goddess - Linea Sinclair
 Gabriel’s Ghost - Linnea Sinclair
 A Civil Campaign - Lois McMaster Bujold
 Shards of Honor - Lois McMaster Bujold
 Primary Inversion - Catherine Asaro (This is also vary much a hard science fiction novel, the author has a PhD in Physics)
 Local Custom - Sharon Lee, Steve Miller
 Scout’s Progress - Sharon Lee, Steve Miller

Crime - Once you colonize other planets or build space stations that are permanent residences, eventually you have crime. Even on this planet in the future, crime will still be with us.
 I’ Robot - Isaac Azimov
 The Caves of Steel - Isaac Azimov
 The Down Home Zombie Blues - Linnea Sinclair
 Leviathan Wakes - James S. A. Corey
 The Demolished Man - Alfred Bester
 Altered Carbon - Richard Morgan
 The Disappeared - Kristine Kathryn Rusch
 The Stainless Steel Rat - Harry Harrison

Colonization - Colonizing another world brings inevitable problems
  Red Mars - Kim Stanley Robinson
 Dragonsdawn - Anne McCaffrey
 40,000 in Gehenna - C J Cherryh
 Freedom’s Landing - Anne McCaffrey
 Remnant Population - Elizabeth Moon
 Farmer in the Sky - Robert Heinlein
 Desolation Road - Ian McDonald
 The Moon is Harsh Mistress - Robert Heinlein

World Building - Epic in scale and loads of detail to make the universe seem very real
 The Sword of the Lamb - M.K. Wren
 Dune - Frank Herbert
 Foundation - Isaac Azimov
 Ringworld - Larry Niven

Aliens - Books that have aliens either meeting humans or in their separate planets
 Foreigner - C. J. Cherryh
 Enemy Mine - Barry Longyear
 The Three Body Problem - Cixin Liu
 Hunter of Worlds - C. J. Cherryh
 Little Fuzzy - H. Beam Piper
 The Faded Sun: Kesrith - C. J. Cherryh
 The Pride of Chanur - C. J. Cherryh
 Brothers of Earth - C. J. Cherryh

Post apocalyptic - what happens after a disaster happens
 The Postman - David Brin
 Canticle for Lebowitz - Walter Miller
 Dies the Fire - S. M. Stirling
 Alas Babylon - Pat Frank
 The Stand - Steven King
 Station Eleven - Emily St.John Mandel
 Eternity Road - Jack McDevitt
 Parable of the Sower - Octavia Butler
 Where Late the Sweet Birds Sang - Kate Wilhelm
 The Breaking of Northwall - Paul O. Williams

Time Travel - what happens after a time machine is invented
 Kindred - Octavia Butler
 In the Garden of Iden - Kage Baker
 The Time Machine - H. G. Wells
 The Time Traveller’s Wife - Audrey Niffenegger
 To Say Nothing of the Dog - Connie Willis
 The Doomsday Book - Connie Willis
 How to Live Safely in a Science Fictional Universe - Charles Yu

Medical Science fiction - Concerning medical practice or diseases
 The Andromeda Strain - Micheal Crichton
 General Practice - James White
 Moreta: Dragonlady of Pern - Anne McCaffrey
 Nerilka’s Story - Anne McCaffrey

Legal science fiction - Includes stories of lawyers, and/or world-building concerning particular types of laws
 A Just Determination - John G. Hemry
 The Dispossessed - Ursula Le Guin
 Nineteen Eighty-Four - Orwell
 Blue Mars - Kim Stanley Robinson
 Illegal Alien - Robert Sawyer
 The Dosadi Experiment - Frank Herbert
 High Justice - Jerry Pournelle
 An Exchange of Hostages - Susan Matthews

Military science fiction - war in the future
 Ender’s Game - Orson Scott Card
 On Basilisk Station - David Weber
 Dauntless - Jack Campbell
 Dorsai!- Gordon R. Dickson
 A Hymn before Battle - John Ringo
 Hammer’s Slammers - David Drake
 Starship Troopers - Robert Heinlein
 Old Man’s War - John Scalzi
 The Forever War - Joe Haldeman
 With the Lightnings - David Drake
 Mutineer - Mike Shepherd
 The Warrior’s Apprentice - Lois McMaster Bujold
 Valor’s Choice - Tanya Huff

Exploration and/or living on another planet - classic theme in science fiction
 Have Space Suit Will Travel - Robert Heinlein
 2001 A Space Odyssey - Arthur C. Clarke
 The Martian - Andy Weir
 Mars - Ben Bova
 Red Mars - Kim Stanley Robinson
 Farmer in the Sky - Robert Heinlein
 Binti -Nnedi Okorafor

Hard science fiction - Science-based especially concerning physics
 Revelation Space - Alistair Reynolds
 Leviathan Wakes - James Corey
 Seven Eves - Neal Stephenson
 2001 A Space Odyssey - Arthur C. Clarke
 Children of Time - Adrian Tchaikovsky
 Consider Phlebas - Iain M. Banks
 The Three-Body Problem - Cixin Liu
 Legacy - Greg Bear

Feminist science fiction - examination of feminist themes in alternate universes or the future
 The Female Man - Joanna Russ
 The Handmaid’s Tale - Margaret Atwood
 Native Tongue - Susette Haden Elgin
 The Gate to Women’s Country - Sheri S. Tepper

Technology - longevity, cloning, first true space drive et. The impact of technological changes on society and people
 Leviathan Wakes - James Corey
 Ancillary Justice - Ann Leckie
 Cyteen C. J. Cherryh
 All System’s Red - Martha Wells

Generation ships - early space colonization before a Faster-than-Light drive is invented,
 The Dark Beyond the Stars - Frank M. Robinson
 Hull Zero Three - Greg Bear
 Dust - Elizabeth Bear
 Orphans of the Sky - Robert Heinlein
 An Unkindness of Ghosts - Rivers Solomon

Traders - The need to trade for things doesn't go away in the future
 Quarter Share - Nathan Lowell
 Alliance Rising - C. J. Cherryh
 Trading in Danger - Elizabeth Moon
 Merchanter’s Luck - C. J. Cherryh
 The Pride of Chanur - C. J. Cherryh

Lost colonies - We sent them out then lost track of them
 All the Weyrs of Pern - Anne McCaffrey
 Remnant Population - Elizabeth Moon
 Forty Thousand in Gehenna - C.J.Cherryh
 Off Armageddon Reef - David Weber

Science fiction fantasy - elements of both genres
 The Compleat Enchanter - L. Sprague de Camp
 Dragon Flight - Anne McCaffrey
 The Gunslinger - Steven King
 The Dying Earth - Jack Vance
 Black Sun RIsing - C. S.Friedman
 The Cloud Roads - Martha Wells

Humor - everybody needs a laugh now and then
 The Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy - Douglas Adams
 Redshirts - John Scalzi
 Callahan’s Crosstime Saloon - Spider Robinson
 The Adventures of the Stainless Steel Rat - Harry Harrison
 Space Opera by Catherynne Valente
 The Long Way to a Small, Angry Planet - Becky Chambers
 Year Zero: A Novel - Rob Reid

Parallel Universes/Alternate History - Examination of what would change if history changed or how an alternative universe might operate
 1632 - Eric Flint
 The Calculating Stars - Mary Robinette Kowal
 The Once and Future Witches - Alix E. Harrow
 The Crossroads of Time - Andre Norton
 The Man in the High Castle - Phillip K. Dick
 The Practice Effect - David Brin
 Conquistador - S. M. Strling
 The Guns of the South - Harry Turtledove
 Worldwar: In the Balance - Harry Turtledove
 Hells Gate - David Weber, Linda Evans
 Crystal Soldier - Sharon Lee, Steve Miller

Literary - for the more literary minded
 The Sparrow - Mary Doria Russell
 The Handmaid’s Tale - Margaret Atwood
 Kindred - Octavia Butler
 Fahrenheit 451 -Ray Bradbury
 Slaughterhouse-Five - Kurt Vonnegut
 Cloud Atlas - David Mitchell
 The Left Hand of Darkness - Ursula Le Guin

Corporate - Companies exist in the future, too. Sometimes they affect the story
 Little Fuzzy - H. Beam Piper
 Fuzzy Nation - John Scalzi
 Rissa Kerguelen - F. M. Busby
 The Atrocity Archives - Charles Stross
 A Civil Campaign - Lois McMaster Bujold

Robots and androids - who doesn't love robots and androids? Science fiction readers certainly do.
 I, Robot - Isaac Azimov
 All Systems Red - Martha Wells
 The Windup Girl - Paolo Bacigalupi
 Ancillary Justice - Ann Leckie
 Saturn’s Children - Charles Stross
 The Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy - Douglas Adams

Clerical/Religious - there is religion in the future and sometimes a conflict of religions from different species
 The Sparrow - Mary Doria Russell
 A Canticle for Leibowitz - Walter M. Miller, Jr.
 The Nine Billion Names of God - Arthur C. Clark
 Calculating God - Robert Sawyer
 The Chaplain’s War - Brad R. Torgerson

Coming of age - young people still grow up and their coming of age stories are always fun
 Citizen of the Galaxy - Robert Heinlein
 Quarter Share - Nathan Lowell
 Space Cadet - Robert Heinlein
 Tunnel in the Sky - Robert Heinlein
 Binti - NnediOkorafor
 The Hunger Games - Suzanne Collins
 Midnight Robber - Nalo Hopkinson
 Ender’s Game - Orson Scott Card

Microbiology, Biology, Genetic Engineering - subset of Hard Science fiction (which many consider the province of physics) based on the biological sciences
 Fantastic Voyage - Isaac Azimov
 Vitals - Greg Bear
 Cyteen - C. J. Cherryh
 The Andromeda Strain - Micheal Crichton
 The Stand - Steven King
 Beggars in Spain - Nancy Kress
 The Atlantis Gene - A. G. Riddle
 Falling Free - Lois McMaster Bujold

Space magicians -subset of Space Fantasy specifically dealing with magicians in space
 Starship’s Mage - Glynn Stewart
 The Price of the Stars - Debra Doyle
 The Witches of Karres - James H. Schmitz
 The Compleat Enchanter - L. Sprague de Camp

Character-Driven - Characters you will never forget. I list the character, then what book or series he/she/it is associated with, then the author. Note the listed character is not necessarily in every book in the series.
 Ari Emory II - Cyteen - C. J. Cherryh
 Honor Harrington - The Honor Harrington Series - David Weber
 Miles Vokosigan - The Vokosigan Saga - Lois McMaster Bujold
 Ishmael Wang- The Golden Age of the Solar Clipper series - Nathan Lowell
 Murderbot - the Murderbot series - Martha Wells
 Ender Wiggin - The Ender’s Game series
 Cletus Graeme - Childe Cycle - Gordon R. Dickson
 Andrei Koscuisko - The Jurisdiction series - Susan Matthews (Note: Andrei is a very flawed character, he is a torturer and a doctor. This series is often searing.)
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November 14, 2020

First Post

Trying to get the hang of this social media thing. Today I want to introduce myself.

Born smack dab in the middle of the Baby Boom, I, like many of my cohort, was a free range child. Have bicycle, will travel. We roamed the county in search of adventure and I never lost that impulse.

There were several formative experiences from my childhood that made me into the writer I am today. For a time we lived on the grounds of the VA Hospital where my father worked. It was a unique environment similar to growing up on a military base.

We wandered the halls of the hospital and interacted with the domiciliary patients (They were the men who suffered from Battle fatigue, now called PTSD, who were warehoused there because they had no effective treatment.)

We swam at the hospital pool in the late afternoon after the patients were done with their physical therapy. We played tennis and climbed the apple trees and rode our bicycles around the campus.

It was the era before air conditioning became common, so every evening in the summer, our parents would gather outside to talk and the kids would play together.

Almost all of our fathers had served in WWII or Korea or both. My father had been a doctor at a MASH unit in Korea. A close friend was the daughter of a man who had been in a Japanese POW camp. The father of another friend lost an arm in Italy. It was an education in the cost of war.

When I was ten, my father handed me a book that changed my life. It was Starship Troopers by Heinlein. It was the first science fiction I read and I was hooked. And the politics underlying the book fascinated me so much that, years later, when I went to college, I majored in Political Science.

My brother, that same year, handed me a book called the Fellowship of the Ring, the first volume of the Lord of the Rings. I gobbled that up, too. And eagerly awaited his visits home from college, so that he could bring me the other volumes.

The next year Star Trek debuted, and my brother introduced us to that as well. I’ve been reading and watching science fiction and fantasy ever since.

As a child, I was too smart for a girl and got ostracized and bullied at school. I got no support at home because my father was emotionally and then sexually abusive. It took decades before I was able to say that out loud.

I was also a horse girl. I asked for a horse for Christmas every year from age 2 until 32 when I decided I would have to buy one myself. I owned three horse in the 18 years I had a horse and trained them in dressage. I also acquired several broken bones from the middle horse, the Hanoverian from Hell.

I never married or had children (unless you count my dogs). But I lived in sin with a man for 26 years until his death in 2008.

Most of my jobs were analytical in nature. I was a sewer planner, a manpower specialist, a management analyst, a technical writer/editor, a systems administrator, a computer instructor, and a database developer and data analyst. But I was always wildly creative as well, designing and making quilts, painting, creating fractal art, taking abstract photographs.

As an adult, I have spent years learning to live with depression and anxiety. I speak openly about that because hiding it makes it shameful, and it is not.

In 2003, I wrote a fan fic for a little known show called Firefly. I thought it had the beginning of an idea for a novel. I knew I couldn't publish in that universe, so I took my idea to my own universe and developed my own characters. But life and work got in the way. In 2018 when I retired, I was still stuck at 8 chapters. I decided that I would make it a retirement project to finish the novel. I published that novel, A Line in The Sand, on Amazon in September 2020. Now it is a part of a planned trilogy . The first draft of volume 2, To the Bitter End, is done and I expect it to be ready for readers by early Jan 2021. I'm about 20% done the first draft of volume 3, Rising From the Ashes. Expect to see that one in the Spring of 2021.

Along the way I got hooked on writing and started taking writing classes (and volunteering) at the Muse Writer’s Center in Norfolk Virginia. I wrote the first draft of two other novels and the workshop feedback made all of my work get better. I have more novels in progress as I start to polish the fantasy and science fiction novels and get them ready for publication. I have at least ten more in various stages of early development.

My work has themes about aftermath because so much of my life has revolved around dealing with the aftermath of abuse, bullying, death, rape, sexual assault and harassment. That doesn't mean everything I write is dark; there are beautiful moments of love, humor, and joy in aftermaths.

My characters are diverse because I didn't read a character who I thought of as representing me until I was in my mid-thirties. Representation is important. I also make sure that older women and men are represented because I am an older woman, and I am tired of only teenagers saving the world.

The heroes in my trilogy are mostly middle-aged with a few young ones thrown in. The hero of my second novel is a 66-year-old woman (and a few dragons). The heroes of my third novel are an 11-year-old girl and a middle-aged, blind woman (who kicks ass at unarmed combat, BTW). Other characters include a disabled alien, a dragon with epilepsy, a couple of married tran people who have four children, a gay healer.

My first book is called a Line in the Sand and is available here:

https://www.amazon.com/Line-Sand-Coup...
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Published on November 14, 2020 22:36