Grant McDuling's Blog
September 25, 2013
Point of View
Choosing how you are going to tell your story is important. Your choice will make a huge difference to the way your readers interact with it. What I am alluding to here is what is known as point of view.
So what actually is point of view? It’s the way the story is told with respect to the narrator. Who is the narrator of your story? The protagonist, the reader, or someone else?
If you choose First Person, the narrator is the protagonist. You can easily tell because the narrator uses words like I and me.
Second Person isn’t as widely used because the reader becomes a participant in the story. Words like You are used a lot in the narration.
Third Person narration happens outside the action and makes use of words like they, he or she.
As you’d probably have gathered by now, first and third person is used most commonly in fiction. Which you choose is up to you but bear in mind it will affect the way your reader interacts with the story.
Let me give you an example. In my most recent book, The Altar Boy (http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00BSIZIZU) I chose to write it in first person.
First person gives the reader a sense of immediacy, a kind of direct link with the narrator. The downside is that it is fairly limiting in that the reader can only gain information that is available to the narrator. It is therefore rather limited in scope.
What is your preferred modality? First person, second person or third person?
So what actually is point of view? It’s the way the story is told with respect to the narrator. Who is the narrator of your story? The protagonist, the reader, or someone else?
If you choose First Person, the narrator is the protagonist. You can easily tell because the narrator uses words like I and me.
Second Person isn’t as widely used because the reader becomes a participant in the story. Words like You are used a lot in the narration.
Third Person narration happens outside the action and makes use of words like they, he or she.
As you’d probably have gathered by now, first and third person is used most commonly in fiction. Which you choose is up to you but bear in mind it will affect the way your reader interacts with the story.
Let me give you an example. In my most recent book, The Altar Boy (http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00BSIZIZU) I chose to write it in first person.
First person gives the reader a sense of immediacy, a kind of direct link with the narrator. The downside is that it is fairly limiting in that the reader can only gain information that is available to the narrator. It is therefore rather limited in scope.
What is your preferred modality? First person, second person or third person?
Published on September 25, 2013 19:59
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point-of-view, style, writing
September 24, 2013
How Superstitious Are You?
Like it or not, superstitions run deep in our society. They are all around us day in and day out and most times, we aren't even aware of it.
Take for instance when someone sneezes. What's the first thing you do? You say 'Bless you', don't you?
Why is this?
Think about it for a minute. Why should you have to bless that person? Because they might be suffering from a bought of hey fever? Not likely.
It all comes down to conditioning. We have been conditioned to do so. And we have been conditioned to do so due to superstition.
In times gone by, sneezing was considered an omen. If you sneezed three times before breakfast, it was thought to mean you were going to receive a present, whereas if you sneezed after a meal, you'd be in for good health. If you sneezed to the right, it was said to be a good omen in that you would be commencing a journey, whereas if you sneezed to the left, that would be very unlucky.
It was considered very unlucky if you didn't bless a person who had just sneezed.
Do you always make a point of blessing someone who has just sneezed? And if you don't, has that brought you bad luck? I'd be interested in your views. As for me, I always say, 'Bless you.'
Take for instance when someone sneezes. What's the first thing you do? You say 'Bless you', don't you?
Why is this?
Think about it for a minute. Why should you have to bless that person? Because they might be suffering from a bought of hey fever? Not likely.
It all comes down to conditioning. We have been conditioned to do so. And we have been conditioned to do so due to superstition.
In times gone by, sneezing was considered an omen. If you sneezed three times before breakfast, it was thought to mean you were going to receive a present, whereas if you sneezed after a meal, you'd be in for good health. If you sneezed to the right, it was said to be a good omen in that you would be commencing a journey, whereas if you sneezed to the left, that would be very unlucky.
It was considered very unlucky if you didn't bless a person who had just sneezed.
Do you always make a point of blessing someone who has just sneezed? And if you don't, has that brought you bad luck? I'd be interested in your views. As for me, I always say, 'Bless you.'
Published on September 24, 2013 14:07
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superstition
December 18, 2012
Do writers have to be master of their tools too these days?
I was intrigued by what Walt Kuenstler, a fellow ghostwriter and partner at Winans Kuenstler Publishing in Pennsylvania had to say in a recent blog. He queries whether writers need to master more than just words in order to survive in the modern world.
Here’s his blog:
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Editorial work is now computer work.
We’ve known it, on some level, for years. But now it’s right there in the job descriptions.
Virginia Hefferman, writing for Yahoo News admonishes all of us writer-types that the integration of digital technology, writing, and publishing of any kind has become the new normal.
She cites this ‘help wanted’ message posted to Twitter by Nicholas Thompson, the editor of The New Yorker website “: “Hiring a digital project manager. Help us at @NewYorker run cool, ambitious tech projects. Ideally, code too. Ping me.”
Ms. Hefferman continues, “Literary work—editorial work—is now computer work. We’ve known it, on some level, for years. But now it’s right there in the job descriptions. What’s the lesson in this for the rest of who aim to make media—whether it’s music, magazines or movies? We must overcome our occupational allergy to product design and marketing and then, as soon as possible, we must learn computer code.”
“Whether we call it photography or prose or TV or graphics the media we now make iscode. The Internet speaks in code; it thinks in code; it moves in code; it looks like code; its strength and value is code.”
Times change. Idioms change. I am 63 years old. When I first worked for the NY Times, giant steam-driven Linotype machines poured hot lead into moulds to make the type that printed each edition. My own grandfather supported a wife and two children retouching photographs with a steady hand and a fine-tipped artist’s brush—no Photoshop, and no computers for that matter.
We forget that Rembrandt and even Matisse not only painted, but also made their own pigments. So today, the 21st century writer confronted with the marvel of interactive eBooks now thinks as a designer, a digital artist, a videographer, a networker, as well as making those pesky words form coherent sentences.
No, not every book will become interactive. Paper books will continue to require no batteries and no WiFi, thank god. But moving forward, eBooks may require ghost writers and ghost programmers as well!
Unquote
Walt makes a very good point. You see, if we look back far in time to the time of the ancient Egyptians, writers had to be good at wielding a hammer and chisel. Then, as things progressed, they needed to make paper out of papyrus. Centuries later, writers had to know how to make a quill pen out of a feather; there was an art to getting the nib just right. Ink, too, they had to mix, using all sorts of pigments, etc.
We do seem to be getting back to similar days, but only with computers. I for one have taken a great interest in ‘how’ computers work because they are the tools of my craft. I also don’t need to be held to ransom by the hardware and software companies of the world, who all seem to want to charge the earth for their wares. So I taught myself how to build my own lightweight operating system that will work on even the oldest of computers.
My operating system is called Arch Linux; it’s lightweight, bleeding edge (always 100% up to date), extremely fast and free.
I know exactly what Walt is getting at in his blog. And I agree. How about you?
Here’s his blog:
Quote
Editorial work is now computer work.
We’ve known it, on some level, for years. But now it’s right there in the job descriptions.
Virginia Hefferman, writing for Yahoo News admonishes all of us writer-types that the integration of digital technology, writing, and publishing of any kind has become the new normal.
She cites this ‘help wanted’ message posted to Twitter by Nicholas Thompson, the editor of The New Yorker website “: “Hiring a digital project manager. Help us at @NewYorker run cool, ambitious tech projects. Ideally, code too. Ping me.”
Ms. Hefferman continues, “Literary work—editorial work—is now computer work. We’ve known it, on some level, for years. But now it’s right there in the job descriptions. What’s the lesson in this for the rest of who aim to make media—whether it’s music, magazines or movies? We must overcome our occupational allergy to product design and marketing and then, as soon as possible, we must learn computer code.”
“Whether we call it photography or prose or TV or graphics the media we now make iscode. The Internet speaks in code; it thinks in code; it moves in code; it looks like code; its strength and value is code.”
Times change. Idioms change. I am 63 years old. When I first worked for the NY Times, giant steam-driven Linotype machines poured hot lead into moulds to make the type that printed each edition. My own grandfather supported a wife and two children retouching photographs with a steady hand and a fine-tipped artist’s brush—no Photoshop, and no computers for that matter.
We forget that Rembrandt and even Matisse not only painted, but also made their own pigments. So today, the 21st century writer confronted with the marvel of interactive eBooks now thinks as a designer, a digital artist, a videographer, a networker, as well as making those pesky words form coherent sentences.
No, not every book will become interactive. Paper books will continue to require no batteries and no WiFi, thank god. But moving forward, eBooks may require ghost writers and ghost programmers as well!
Unquote
Walt makes a very good point. You see, if we look back far in time to the time of the ancient Egyptians, writers had to be good at wielding a hammer and chisel. Then, as things progressed, they needed to make paper out of papyrus. Centuries later, writers had to know how to make a quill pen out of a feather; there was an art to getting the nib just right. Ink, too, they had to mix, using all sorts of pigments, etc.
We do seem to be getting back to similar days, but only with computers. I for one have taken a great interest in ‘how’ computers work because they are the tools of my craft. I also don’t need to be held to ransom by the hardware and software companies of the world, who all seem to want to charge the earth for their wares. So I taught myself how to build my own lightweight operating system that will work on even the oldest of computers.
My operating system is called Arch Linux; it’s lightweight, bleeding edge (always 100% up to date), extremely fast and free.
I know exactly what Walt is getting at in his blog. And I agree. How about you?
Published on December 18, 2012 14:30
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arch-linux, computers, linux, tools, writers


