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September 30, 2015
YA Scavenger Hunt – Fall 2015!
Welcome to YA Scavenger Hunt! This bi-annual event was first organized by author Colleen Houck as a way to give readers a chance to gain access to exclusive bonus material from their favorite authors and a chance to win some awesome prizes! On this Fall 2015 hunt, you will get access to exclusive content from 160 authors divided into eight teams of 20. I am on TEAM TEAL, and if you visit all 20 authors on my team and add up our clues, you can enter for our prize–one lucky winner will receive one signed book from each author on my team! Many of us, including me, are offering additional prizes as well. But play fast: this contest (and all the exclusive bonus material) will only be online for 72 hours!

Go to the YA Scavenger Hunt site to find out all about the hunt, including the lists of participating authors, the prize lists, and more!
For now, here’s the quick and dirty directions:
The Puzzle: Below, you’ll notice that I’ve listed my favorite number. Collect the favorite numbers of all the authors on team teal, and then add them up.
Entry Form: Once you’ve added up all the numbers, make sure you fill out the form here to officially qualify for the grand prize. Only entries that have the correct number will qualify.
Rules: Open internationally, anyone below the age of 18 should have a parent or guardian’s permission to enter. To be eligible for the grand prize, you must submit the completed entry form by October 5th, 2015, at noon Pacific Time. Entries sent without the correct number or without contact information will not be considered.
I AM HOSTING SHARI BECKER!

Shari Becker was born in Montreal, Quebec, and was raised speaking both English and French. As a child, she spent her summers in the Adirondack Mountains catching fireflies, minnows, and toads. She has an MA from New York University and has worked for Nickelodeon, for Disney-owned companies, and even for an Emmy Award–winning puppeteer. She is the author of two picture books, including Maxwell’s Mountain, a Junior Library Guild Selection and Charlotte Zolotow Honor Book. She now lives in Brookline, Massachusetts, with her husband, their two daughters, and their dog. She loves lakes, but despises the bridges that run over them.
About Shari’s latest book, Stellow Project:

When a killer storm unexpectedly hits Manhattan, seventeen-year-old Lilah Stellow’s dad insists that she and her younger sister, Flori, take refuge at their cabin in the mountains. But instead of joining them with the experimental drug that keeps Lilah alive, he disappears just as news reports name him as a prime suspect in an act of ecoterrorism.As days pass without her medicine, Lilah finds herself teetering on the edge, caring for her sister, and growing increasingly certain they’re being watched. In her search for answers, Lilah is thrown into the center of a mystery involving an off-the-grid research facility and finds herself drawn in by Daniel, an intriguing boy who is the son of the lead scientist. As she dares to seek answers, Lilah slowly realizes that even the best intentions can go horribly wrong.
Find out more information by checking out Shari’s website or find more about Stellow Project here!
As her exclusive content Shari offers a sneak peek at her paranormal work-in-progress called Indigo. So without further ado . . .
Ellie ran her fingers through her blue streaks. They’d faded to an aquatic shade of turquoise, which she kinda liked. Too bad she’d have to change them now. Maybe red. She hadn’t done red in a while. The sun shifted outside her room sending a beam of light directly onto her scalp. It was like a spotlight, taunting her.
Oh God, Ellie thought. No. No!
She leaned into the mirror to look closer. There was no mistaking them. More grey roots, this time in a clump, right above her right ear. Ellie could feel her throat beginning to close. She gagged, trying to push away the “I’m going to cry” feeling.
As if having grey hair wasn’t bad enough. But new roots, in a clump … that was a sign.
The doctors told her she was crazy, but she knew they were wrong. Okay, maybe she was a little crazy, but she was right about this. All these “brilliant” medical experts were so quick to diagnose her with all sorts of syndromes and ailments, but when she pointed out the obvious – that the grey always came a day or two before – they snorted, as if her powers of perception and deduction were so comical and naive they weren’t even worth considering.
Ellie tried to regulate her breathing. I have a few days, she thought. Maybe three, maybe four. I’ll be prepared this time. It’ll be different. She hoped she was right.
She was wrong last time.
And the time before.
Ellie glanced at the clock and then back at the grey. She couldn’t go out like this. Blue was better than grey. Red was better than grey. Better to be different by choice than by bad luck.
Ellie grabbed her already open Head Goop and smeared gobs into her hair, creating clumps. There was an art to creating hair that looked perfectly messy. Between the sheen of the pomade and careful planning. Maybe no one would notice.
Ellie shook her head from side to side, the clumps holding together like long potato roots. She pulled her Doc Martin boots over her green and white striped knee socks, stood up and adjusted her fringed jean shorts. Her outfit looked frickin’ awesome. Like a punk meets My Little Pony or something. She was lucky her parents didn’t care about things like clothes and hair. Her mom believed in self expression, at least that’s what she’d said. She never said anything about any of Ellie’s outfits, but sometimes she could swear she could see the corners of her mom’s mouth turn up, just a bit, as if amused, by Ellie’s choices. Some kids might have thought she was super lucky, but she knew better. Ellie’s parents didn’t care about outfits because they had bigger things to worry about: a daughter who heard voices, a daughter convinced she was possessed, a daughter with one foot into a psych ward – for an extended stay.
She grinned just a little as she grabbed her backpack, thinking about the looks on her parents faces when they’d see her get-up. The minute she’d walk out the door, her mother would scream,“James, did you see what she wore today?”
And then she felt it. The roll of her belly. Queasiness. God no. She grabbed onto the back of her desk chair. Please no. It was too soon.
She should have had at least a day. Maybe two. That’s how these attacks always went. First the grey appeared. It started at her roots, and it spread, slowly from tip to end. It usually took at least two days to cover the whole piece. The attacks came only after the hair was full grey. Ellie leaned into her mirror. The grey was still at the roots. It couldn’t be an attack. It was too fast. She couldn’t have another today. Hell, she couldn’t have another one ever. It was like this force crawled into her and turned the volume up on every single organ and sense in her body. In the beginning, the attacks were mild: she could feel every woven thread in the fabric of her clothing. She could smell every single ingredient in her face soap. She could hear the expanding and contracting of her lungs, like some tiny, relentless whistle inside of her. But that was then. Now, the attacks were incapacitating. She threw up, she blacked out, she heard voices. Voices that seemed to come from places and things that weren’t supposed to speak.
Ellie stood tall and tried to breathe slowly through her nostrils. No, it wasn’t an attack. The grey was still at the roots. It was her pomade. The smell was too strong. She knew it when she bought it, but she’d let vanity trump logic. Smells were dangerous. She should wash her hair. If she washed the Pomade out, got rid of the smell. She’d be okay.
Ellie glanced at the clock. 7:45. She was meeting KP at the corner. She’d be late. Again. She had a history test this morning, too. Shit, no time for a shower. She had back-to-back classes today, and it would be impossible to get to the school gym showers. She would have to wash the smell out in a bathroom sink at school. It would all be okay.
The smell of eggs and oatmeal filled the staircase as she made her way down. These smells didn’t turn her stomach. These smells enveloped her up in a cozy blanket. She wished she could go into the kitchen, wrap herself in the safety of her mother and breakfast. But she couldn’t. Her mother would take one look at her and know something was wrong. If she saw the way Ellie was rubbing her temples with her palms … . They’d made a deal. And Ellie knew she had to keep it.
Hand clenched on the railing.
“Ellie, breakfast is ready!” Her mom called from the kitchen.
“Sorry Mom,” Ellie tried to keep her voice even. Her mother could not know. No way. She’d promised. She swore. No More.
“I’m totally late. History test this morning. KP and I are studying on the way…”
“But Ellie…” her mother began.
Ellie knew what she’d say. The doctors said a full breakfast would help: that protein would keep her brain clear. What about your vitamins?
A loud beat shuddered through Ellie’s ears. Her heart beat at volume 20. What if is wasn’t the pomade?
Ellie closed the front door before her mother could even see her. The skin on her legs was beginning to crawl: prickling and scratching from the seams of her socks.
An attack was beginning, and Ellie had no choice but to stop it.
Don’t forget to enter the contest for a chance to win 20 signed books by the authors on TEAM TEAL! To enter, you need to know that my favorite number is FIVE (5). Add up all the favorite numbers of the authors on TEAM TEAL and you’ll have the secret code to enter for the grand prize!
If you like, you can also enter my giveaway for a signed copy of my debut novel In A World Just Right. Just click on the Rafflecopter link below.
CONTINUE THE HUNT
To keep going on the hunt, check out the next author!
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April 28, 2015
I am officially a published author
I began novel writing many, many years ago.
After toying with a story idea for years, in 2004 I went to graduate school (for an MA) and again in 2010 (for an MFA) to find some guidance. There I completed not one, but two, manuscripts. My third manuscript, In A World Just Right, I began writing in the fall of 2011 and finished in January of 2012. More than three years later–April 28, 2015–In A World Just Right is now a book that anyone in the world may (hopefully) enjoy.
To mark the occasion, I will share a little something from my workspace.
Here is a picture of my favorite items on my desk:
(I will note that just outside the frame are about 100 post-its and index cards of varying colors reminding me to do stuff. I have spared you the clutter so you may focus on what’s important!)
Note the piece of paper lying underneath all my lovely objects? Here is a close-up of the words on it:
I can’t remember now where I got this info. It’s been so long. The words are a bit difficult to make out in the photo, so I copy them here:
*–The first Harry Potter book is reported to have been rejected by 14 publishers.
*–Stephen King’s Carrie had been rejected more than 30 times before being picked up for publication.
*–Richard Bach’s Johnathan Livingston Seagull received more than 140 rejections.
*–After 743 rejection slips, British author John Creasey went on to have 564 mystery novels published!
*–Madeleine L’Engle’s A Wrinkle in Time received over 30 rejections. It took 10 years to get pubished, and then went on to win a Newbery Award.
*–Dr. Seuss’s first book was rejected 29 times before being picked up by publishers.
I have looked that this piece of paper every day for more years than I can keep track of. It has served as both an inspiration and a reminder of my goal.
On this important day in my life, I am going to read it one last time then put it away in my keepsake bin. It’s not that I don’t need inspiration anymore, but today, for me, marks the end of one phase of a journey.
Thank you to all who have helped me get here!
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April 2, 2015
YA Scavenger Hunt!
Welcome to YA Scavenger Hunt! This bi-annual event was first organized by author Colleen Houck as a way to give readers a chance to gain access to exclusive bonus material from their favorite authors…and a chance to win some awesome prizes! At this hunt, you not only get access to exclusive content from each author, you also get a clue for the hunt. Add up the clues, and you can enter for our prize–one lucky winner will receive one signed book from each author on the hunt on my team! But play fast: this contest (and all the exclusive bonus material) will only be online for 72 hours!
Go to the YA Scavenger Hunt page to find out all about the hunt. There are EIGHT contests going on simultaneously, and you can enter one or all! I am a part of the GREEN TEAM–but there is also a blue team, a pink team, a gold team, a red team, an orange team, a teal team, and a purple team for a chance to win a whole different set of signed books!
If you’d like to find out more about the hunt, see links to all the authors participating, and see the full list of prizes up for grabs, go to the YA Scavenger Hunt page.
To add to the celebration, I’m giving away a signed ARC of my forthcoming YA novel, In A World Just Right. You can enter for the ARC below. Make sure as you continue to blog hop that you’re on the lookout for other individual author prizes being offered in addition to the YASH grand prizes!
SCAVENGER HUNT PUZZLE
Directions: Below, you’ll need to find where I’ve written my favorite number. Collect the favorite numbers of all the authors on the green team, and then add them up.
Entry Form: Once you’ve added up all the numbers, make sure you fill out the form here to officially qualify for the grand prize. Only entries that have the correct number will qualify.
Rules: Open internationally, anyone below the age of 18 should have a parent or guardian’s permission to enter. To be eligible for the grand prize, you must submit the completed entry form by April 5th, at noon Pacific Time. Entries sent without the correct number or without contact information will not be considered.
NOW ON TO THE SCAVENGER HUNT POST
WITH EXCLUSIVE CONTENT!
Today I’m hosting Colleen Gleason for the YA Scavenger Hunt!
Colleen is a New York Times bestselling author with more than two dozen novels in print, including the international bestselling paranormal romance series The Gardella Vampire Chronicles—about a female vampire hunter who lives during the time of Jane Austen.

Evaline Stoker and Mina Holmes never meant to get into the family business. But when you’re the sister of Bram and the niece of Sherlock, vampire hunting and mystery solving are in your blood.
Find out more by checking out Colleen’s author website here, and find more about her book here!
NOW FOR YOUR STOKER AND HOLMES EXCLUSIVE!
Don’t forget to enter the contest for a chance to win a ton of signed books by me, Colleen Gleason, and more! To enter, you need to know that my favorite number is 5. Add up all the favorite numbers of the authors on the green team, and you’ll have the secret code to enter for the grand prize!
CONTINUE THE HUNT
To keep going on your quest for the hunt, you need to check out the next author, Vanessa Barger!
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October 29, 2014
Meet Jake Smith
I’ve met a lot of people on this publishing road, and Jake Smith is one of the classiest. His novel, Wish, was released in May of this year from Tyndale House Publishers, and it tugs just as many heartstrings as you would think from this description:
James McConnell’s one wish is that his nine-year-old son will finally be healthy enough to play a game of catch. Then he and his wife, Emily, receive news they’ve dreaded: Aaron’s cancer has relapsed. As the family steels themselves for a draining treatment regimen in yet another hospital, Aaron receives the gift of a lifetime—a personal visit from one of his favorite professional baseball players—and the chance to make a bold request, his wish: to see his dad play in one major league game. A former college standout, James fears he doesn’t have the talent it takes, even for one game, and that he’ll miss what could be Aaron’s precious last weeks. Yet how can he refuse his dying son’s wish? Poignant and triumphant, Wish is the story of a father’s love, a family’s perseverance, and the miracles that can happen when you believe in the impossible.
Because I love this book so much, I asked Jake if he’d answer a few questions, and he obliged:
Talk a bit about the genesis of Wish.
The image for Wish – a young father, standing alone in the middle of a Major League Baseball field, under the lights, the crowd going crazy, and he’s wondering how in the world he got there – came out of necessity. I’d just tallied my hundred-and-something rejection for a YA science fiction novel I was querying, when I said out loud, “All right, I get it… I’m not supposed to work on this one. So what else should I write about?” That image flashed in my head.
At about the same time, we were watching a Detroit Tigers baseball game, and one of our favorite players hit a home run; and as he’s rounding the bases, the announcers begin talking about a little boy that player had visited in the hospital earlier in the day. That’s when the idea of this unbelieveable experience this father has, of playing in one MLB game, comes about because of a wish from his ill son.
What kind of research did you do in order to write Wish?
I’m a baseball nut to begin with, playing a lot in high school and helping as an assistant coach at my alma mater a handful of years ago. I talked with some former Major Leaguers (including the player who hit that home run I mentioned before), and had another former player and current ESPN baseball analyst, Doug Glanville, review the manuscript. On the medical side, I had several chats with pediatric oncologists, hospital administrators, and families who have fought childhood leukemia with their children, all so very powerful. Tours of a couple of children’s hospitals and the “behind the scenes” of Comerica Park (home of the Detroit Tigers) and another Minor League Baseball park provided a dose of realism that proved invaluable.
You’ve been described as a man who writes “fiction with a mission.” What does that mean? What is the “mission” for Wish?
Wish is more than just a story. As soon as I thought of the ill child, I thought, “Well, if this works, we could use it to do some good.” Which is exactly what we’ve been able to do, donating a large chunk of proceeds to children’s hospitals around Michigan, and inspiring people to join the bone marrow registry at www.BeTheMatch.org. My kids are, thankfully, healthy, so I feel I’ve been called to use whatever gifts I might have – telling a story – to do as much good as possible. It’s been one of the most unbelievable experiences of my life to receive letters from readers who tell me that as soon as they finished reading Wish, they signed up on the registry. The only thing that could eclipse that is if someone actually matched a person in need and went on to save their life. I’ve been on the registry for nearly 15 years, and I’ve never been called to donate; what a wonderful feeling that must be!
Describe your path to publication. What has been your greatest challenge? Greatest triumph?
Wish tallied 55 rejections before finding an agent – and to do that, it took a friend-of-a-friend referral to an agent, an agent whose call I screened when he called the house that night! (It’s true; I thought he was a telemarketer.) From three years of writing letters and receiving “Sorry, not for us” letters, to a whirlwind 24 hours, and I had an agent. After two lengthy revisions, it went out to publishers, and we received an offer. It was a little more than three months from signing with my agent to receiving an offer from Tyndale House Publishers.
Greatest challenge: the second revision, in which I had to try to fix my bad writing habit of using too many passive words (in the end, I feel it made me a better writer).
Greatest triumph(s): opening the box of hardcovers and seeing my name, writing donation checks to hospitals, and getting that first letter saying that someone signed up on the bone marrow registry because of Wish.
What are some books that have had an influence on you? or What are some of your favorite books/authors?
I wish I could give you the name of an obscure writer so that people would run to the bookstore to search for it, but in truth, The Hobbit and Lord of the Rings probably had the biggest influence on me for one reason: they sparked my imagination. I’ve always felt that imagination is one of the most important thing youngsters – especially teenagers – can develop, because imagination leads to ambition, which leads to perseverance. That’s why I’m so thrilled about the amazing world of Young Adult literature these days – so many fabulous stories and storytellers (like you!) for kids to absolutely lose themselves in.
Authors Dan Walsh, Jason F. Wright, and Kevin Milne (all in my genre of inspiring, family- and faith-based fiction; and all gracious enough to provide cover blurbs for Wish) have been great sources of inspiration. And I’m a fan of Doug Stanton as well, and his ability to treat a non-fiction event (war stories) with a novel-esque style. The way he applies his research is incredible.
What advice would you give to other writers?
Develop a process for editing. It’s tough to like your story during the editing phase, but if you compartmentalize your editing – take different aspects of the story in different phases – the process can go a little smoother. I do a chapter edit as soon as I’m done writing a chapter; then when the manuscript is done, I do a content edit; a mechanical edit (grammar, punctuation, etc.); a “bad-writing habit” edit (see above); an “out loud” edit (reading the book out loud, great for identifying run-on sentences, missing or repetitive or improper words, and for dialogue); and then one more “story edit.”
What ritual/charm/beverage do you require in order to sit down and write?
I have a fountain pen my dad gave me as a college graduation present, saying, “From one writer to another.” (He’s a well-known outdoor book and magazine author and editor.) I confess that I never really felt like I could call myself a writer until I sold a piece of my fiction. I used that pen to sign the publishing contract for Wish. So I sort of hold that pen and say a prayer for an open mind and a vivid imagination. And I listen to a lot of movie soundtracks.
You are working on a new novel project now. Can you tell us a little about it?
It’s another “fiction with a mission” book, this one revolving around high school basketball, dogs, and the military. Some of my research has been pretty emotional so far. I’m only a few chapters into it, and it’s a bit more difficult to write. With Wish, I didn’t have any expectations or timelines; now, I feel all of these things looking over my shoulder!
Thank you, Jake! I loved Wish and look forward to reading your next book!
Jake Smith is an author and magazine editor who lives in Traverse City, Michigan, with his wife, Vickie, their three children, and a Labrador retriever. A former assistant high school baseball coach and All-State shortstop, Jake now spends his time on the field helping coach his kids’ youth baseball teams.Wish is Jake’s debut novel, and he hopes it will help support children’s hospitals, patient and family foundations, and participation in the National Marrow Donor Program.
Find Jake on his website, Facebook, Twitter.
Find Wish on Amazon.
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September 28, 2014
The 777 Meme
I’ve been tagged by Albert Wendland for the 777 meme!
The rules:
Go to the 7th line of the 7th page of your work in progress.
Post the first full 7 lines.
Then tag 7 friends.
My work in progress is my second title contracted with Simon and Schuster Books For Young Readers. I was absent the day tagline-writing genes were handed out, so think generous thoughts when you read the below. Here is my stab at a one-sentence summary of the plot:
Six former playmates, now grown apart as seniors in high school, discover that the chest of jewelry they found and kept secret as children is an infamous collection with a profound purpose, and wearing the jewelry has come at a price for each of them.
My first complete novel draft came in 50,000 words too large, so I’m not sure if there will be six or four main characters in the next draft. Such is the revision process!
Anyway, one of the characters, call him Brett, is struggling with abuse at home. His own “Consequences” have grown less scary as he’s grown larger than his mother, but he watches helplessly as his sweet, six-year-old brother endures some of the same things he once did. Brett’s particular upbringing has left him with some confused ideas about the nature of his power with respect to women/girls.
This passage is part of his introduction in chapter one. To all the line-counters out there: yes, I cheated, and this is more than seven. You can stop reading after seven if you like!
He’d never set out to be a bad boy. Somehow it just happened.
He and Julie had fallen behind on the getting drunk part of the night, and Julie was racing to catch back up with the group. Festivities moved on from I Never when Jade and Oscar finally came downstairs and suggested a dice game. Julie swallowed half a can each time it was her turn.
“Hey,” Brett whispered. He turned his face to her ear so no one but Julie would be able to hear him. “Slow down, there, chugger. You okay?”
“Yeah.” She nodded and forced out a grin. It was the I’m not alright but I’m trying to pretend I am face. He hated that face. It meant she was going to cry later. It meant he was a jerk.
Well, he was, wasn’t he? He’d asked her to go down the hall, even though she was the one who’d said yes. He’d kissed her first, but she’d kissed back. He’d taken the lead from there, and she’d followed right back. They’d both had some beer, but like some girls did when they wanted to fool around, and wanted their forwardness blamed on the alcohol, she’d been pretending to be more drunk than she possibly could have been. Hadn’t she?
Hadn’t she?
(And, yes, Brett’s piece from the collection is a ring based off the one you see above.)
So there you have it. Next up are seven wonderful writers I’ve had the pleasure of working with:
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July 21, 2014
#mywritingprocess blog tour
I’ve been tagged by my Freshman Fifteens buddy Kim Savage, author of After The Woods, to participate in the #mywritingprocess blog tour. Her writing process can be found here. As a taggee, I’m supposed to answer the following four questions, so here goes:
1) What am I working on?
Well, I just finished the first draft of my second YA book in my contract with Simon & Schuster Books For Young Readers. Tentatively titled Jewelry, it’s the story of six high school seniors living with the (magical, disturbing) consequences of discovering a jewelry chest in a back yard pond when they were ten years old. Now that the manuscript is in my editor’s hands for a bit, I have to decide what to work on next—a revision of one of my two earlier manuscripts? Something entirely different? (I actually think I know the answer, but for now it’s a secret!)
2) How does my work differ from others of its genre?
I’m not sure it does “differ.” That implies most other books in the genre are the same. Today’s YA field is wide and complex, with room for genre-blending, experimentation, and a wide range of age-appropriateness. There isn’t a formula to be “different” from, except for the requirement that the protagonist be a young adult. Almost anything goes, and that’s one of the reasons I like writing YA so much. My two contracted books are a genre mix of contemporary, fantasy, and romance, and both contain a mysterious element. I also like to believe my stories have a takeaway that makes a reader think even after they’ve finished the book, though I certainly am not the first YA author to hope this.
3) Why do I write what I do?
I bet there’s a whole psychoanalysis of me that can be done to answer this question. The short answer, though, is that I write what I feel like writing. I chose to be a high school teacher for fourteen years, and now I write for that audience, so I guess I find something fascinating about that time of life. I also love science fiction and fantasy because I feel those genres have the potential to test characters in unusual and meaningful ways.
4) How does my individual writing process work?
Generally something like this: I develop a concept and some characters, like a boy who can create worlds or a group of kids who find a jewelry chest. Then I brainstorm a bit about what could happen in the story and what the ending might be. Then I write. One chapter at a time I let the story unfold for myself, occasionally pausing to think about where I’m headed. It’s like reading any other book, wondering what’s going to happen next. I often have no idea until I write the words. Both of my contracted books ended in a far different place from where I thought they might go, and that process of finding my way through a plot is most of the pleasure of writing for me. Of course, the downside is I find myself having to revise my beginnings quite a bit to match my endings!
Next up: Two writers who have been an integral part of my journey to become a professional writer. Rhonda Mason‘s writing spans the gamut of speculative fiction, from space opera to epic fantasy to urban paranormal and back again. Her space opera trilogy, Empress Game, launches from Titan Books July 2015. Writer/Producer Diana Dru Botsford‘s work runs the gamut from novels to the screen including several Stargate SG-1 novels, the Star Trek TNG episode, “Rascal’s” and the award-winning science fiction webseries “Epilogue.” She most recently contributed to the up-and-coming Stargate short story anthology, “Far Horizons,” due from Fandemonium this fall.

February 24, 2014
Where I’m at Part 7: Long time no see
I’ve kept my distance from this blog for a few months because most of what’s been on my mind is more personal than professional in nature.
On a happy note, I’ve done a lot of traveling with my family. We visited the Blue Ridge Mountains (from Asheville, NC) and Great Smoky Mountains National Park (from Sevierville, TN). We also spent the end of 2013/beginning of 2014 out West (Scottsdale, AZ, Las Vegas, NV, and Grand Canyon National Park). I attended YALLFest (Charleston, SC) and the NCTE ALAN workshop (Boston, MA).
I’ve also said goodbye to some dear family members—my grandmother, my cousin, and my aunt. I don’t want them to be gone. I miss them so very much.
And, of course, since I live in the Boston area, I’ve spent a considerable amount of time dealing with snow!
As for progress on my book in the publishing world, I completed two revisions with notes from my editor and a third revision with notes from my copy editor. I understand there will be one final edit to come. In A World Just Right is still scheduled for release in the spring of 2015. Between now and then galleys will be printed for the purpose of getting reviews ahead of the release. Soon I should have cover art. Mostly, all is progressing at the slow but steady pace that it should be. It takes a long time to prepare a book for release.
I’ve been hard at work researching my next book, tentatively titled Jewelry. I’m a bit behind where I wanted to be at this point, largely because of the travel and the mourning, but I’ll catch up. I always do.
I conclude with some pictures from the last few months.
View of the Blue Ridge Mountains.
Visitors at our cabin in Sevierville.
At Daniel Stowe Botanical Garden outside Charlotte, NC.
Deer on the pond in my back yard.

September 17, 2013
Thoughts after reading Insurgent
A small storm of thoughts have converged on me today as the result of three occurrences: 1) Yesterday I finished reading Insurgent, 2) I am disheartened by some of the response to the choosing of Miss America, 3) I am ever mindful of the place YA literature has/should have in the high school classroom.
Whenever I read a book, I think about what students could gain from reading it. In this frame of mind, I noted the following passages from Veronica Roth’s Insurgent:
“People, I have discovered, are layers and layers of secrets. You believe you know them, that you understand them, but their motives are always hidden from you, buried in their own hearts. You will never know them, but sometimes you decide to trust them” (510).
“Color fills her cheeks, and I think it again: that Johanna Reyes might still be beautiful. Except now I think that she isn’t just beautiful in spite of the scar, she’s somehow beautiful with it, like Lynn with her buzzed hair, like Tobias with the memories of his father’s cruelty that he wears like armor, like my mother in her plain gray clothing” (517).
If this book were read in my classroom, I would ask students to explain what they thought each passage meant in the context of the book. Then I would ask how they could apply this meaning to what they know of life.
How valuable it would be for young people to reflect upon their knowledge of others—friends, family, acquaintances, strangers—and on what they can or cannot truly know about them. How valuable to reflect upon what they choose to share with others and what others can never really know of them. Or upon how they can trust people whose motives may or may not be transparent to them. Or upon beauty and whether it might possibly stem from what people become because they have suffered.
Despite the usefulness I see of including such a book and such a discussion in a high school classroom, I have personally witnessed some educators’ dismissal of contemporary YA works as “worthless,” “simple,” or “too focused on kissing, popularity, and vampires.” Can such an attitude be espoused by a person who has read a book like Insurgent and discussed with students the passages quoted above? I have a hard time believing so.
The truth is that high school students possess many resources that will make meaning of canonical texts for them. The teacher will do it in the classroom. The internet will do it outside the classroom. With so many answers out there, the sad truth is that many students choose not to read the challenging, original text at all. If they don’t read the text, they can’t make their own meaning.
One of the primary values of YA literature, to me, besides its presentation as less daunting than a canonical tome, is the use of a young adult protagonist’s perspective to make it easier for the young reader to make their own meaning.
When I read comments about in Indian-American becoming Miss America that call her a Muslim terrorist, or bemoan the fact that she was chosen just after the anniversary of 9/11, or that another, whiter candidate is somehow more “American” because she can shoot a gun and loves her country, I think of the chance that might have been missed when these commenters were in high school, what truths they might have discovered if they hadn’t been forced to accept a teacher’s interpretation of a canonical text, but instead had been asked to read and discuss YA literature that delivered messages about being human in a way that could help them make meaning for themselves.
I believe that texts read in schools should be challenging, but I don’t necessarily believe that for a young audience they should be challenging for their obscure language, sophisticated art, or esoteric philosophy. Many, many young people, to be sure, have the skills and aptitude to handle the canon independently or with minimal guidance, and I strongly believe all students should experience the canon. However, I feel there is a challenge even greater than the one to stretch a vocabulary or appreciate brilliant figures of speech. It is the challenge to one’s ideas and beliefs about the world. For many, many students, YA literature is the very best vehicle to help them rise to that challenge.
I realize that this post probably seems self-serving because I’m now going to be a published writer of YA literature. However, my belief in the power of contemporary YA books predates my decision to write them. I write because I hope something I have to say will challenge young people to examine, then confirm or revise, their ideas and beliefs.

August 9, 2013
Where Im at Part 6: Offer accepted!
So this not-quite-published-yet writer is one giant step closer to having a book in print. For me, it was not the one-week whirlwind that it sometimes can be, but in the end I got a deal that Im happy with. Excited about! THRILLED, really!
The brief tale goes like this: I signed with my agent, Alexandra Machinist at Janklow and Nesbit, last summer. I waited in line for a bit for World Maker to be submitted to editors. In January, Alexandra sent the manuscript to an editor as an exclusive because said editor had been looking for something like World Maker. The editor liked it and asked me to revise a significant aspect of the novel, which I did. On May 2nd, I was told shed decided to pass on making an offer.
In mid-May Alexandra sent the manuscript out to six editors. In the first week of June, Christian Trimmer at Simon and Schuster Books for Young Readers expressed interest. He took it to his editorial team and then requested a revision from me. I was, admittedly, nervous about doing another revision since the revision for the other editor had taken up so much time only to be rejected. But Christian convinced me he was enthusiastic about the project, he was good at articulating what he wanted changed, and the revision focused only on the first couple of chapters. In the end, I simply moved a scene from chapter two to the opening and tweaked accordingly. Over the next few weeks Christian read my revision, gave the manuscript to second readers in the editorial department and, Im assuming, took it to another editorial meeting where the changes were approved. The next week it went on to the acquisitions meeting, where an offer was approved. My agent did some negotiating, and I ended up with a two-book deal and a great editor at a great publishing house!
(Here is the Publishers Weekly announcement, if you like to look these things up.)
Although it took some time to get the ball rolling, sometimes patience is necessary to get the end result you want. I couldnt be happier with the result I got.
World Maker likely wont be published until 2015, so there is yet more waiting to do. While I wait for my editorial letter on World Maker (which will likely be given a new title), I must get to work on an outline for book two of my two-book deal. Remember that post I wrote a little while ago about an idea I got while going for popcorn? The idea is barely 1,000 words of notes, but thats the book I sold with World Maker!
I must conclude with a HUGE THANK YOU to Alexandra Machinist and Christian Trimmer. My little book is a little different, a little hard to pitch because although its about a boy who makes a world so he can have a girlfriend, its more than that description would lead one to believe. Both Alexandra and Christian saw something in it that made them read to the end, and in reading to the end they decided to become champions of the manuscript, and I cant quite express in accurate enough terms how very much that means to me.
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Where I’m at Part 6: Offer accepted!
So this “not-quite-published-yet” writer is one giant step closer to having a book in print. For me, it was not the one-week whirlwind that it sometimes can be, but in the end I got a deal that I’m happy with. Excited about! THRILLED, really!
The brief tale goes like this: I signed with my agent, Alexandra Machinist at Janklow and Nesbit, last summer. I waited in line for a bit for World Maker to be submitted to editors. In January, Alexandra sent the manuscript to an editor as an exclusive because said editor had been looking for something like World Maker. The editor liked it and asked me to revise a significant aspect of the novel, which I did. On May 2nd, I was told she’d decided to pass on making an offer.
In mid-May Alexandra sent the manuscript out to six editors. In the first week of June, Christian Trimmer at Simon and Schuster Books for Young Readers expressed interest. He took it to his editorial team and then requested a revision from me. I was, admittedly, nervous about doing another revision since the revision for the other editor had taken up so much time only to be rejected. But Christian convinced me he was enthusiastic about the project, he was good at articulating what he wanted changed, and the revision focused only on the first couple of chapters. In the end, I simply moved a scene from chapter two to the opening and tweaked accordingly. Over the next few weeks Christian read my revision, gave the manuscript to second readers in the editorial department and, I’m assuming, took it to another editorial meeting where the changes were approved. The next week it went on to the acquisitions meeting, where an offer was approved. My agent did some negotiating, and I ended up with a two-book deal and a great editor at a great publishing house!
(Here is the Publishers Weekly announcement, if you like to look these things up.)
Although it took some time to get the ball rolling, sometimes patience is necessary to get the end result you want. I couldn’t be happier with the result I got.
World Maker likely won’t be published until 2015, so there is yet more waiting to do. While I wait for my editorial letter on World Maker (which will likely be given a new title), I must get to work on an outline for book two of my two-book deal. Remember that post I wrote a little while ago about an idea I got while going for popcorn? The idea is barely 1,000 words of notes, but that’s the book I sold with World Maker!
I must conclude with a HUGE THANK YOU to Alexandra Machinist and Christian Trimmer. My little book is a little different, a little hard to pitch because although it’s about a boy who makes a world so he can have a girlfriend, it’s more than that description would lead one to believe. Both Alexandra and Christian saw something in it that made them read to the end, and in reading to the end they decided to become champions of the manuscript, and I can’t quite express in accurate enough terms how very much that means to me.
