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Blind Love is giving me problems. The younger blind hero (I haven’t named him yet for sure) just doesn’t want to be actively rude to older hero (This being very polite Japan). I see re-writes in my future. My original concept had the older hero as blind, but I didn’t think the younger hero would get the nerve up to make a move. I keep going back and forth. Advice desperately wanted!

What do you think, is it better for the younger or older hero to be newly in the dark and therefore vulnerable and in need of assistance?