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Asghar
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Apr 11, 2016 12:09PM
so, this is what I was doing in my Before Sunset days. :)
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"Follow this White Rabbit, Iva Gyongy did, so you know you're perfectly safe."Do I?
"When She was dreaming it was Wave of a Dark Ocean. When She woke up it became Beyond Desire."
This is so beautiful.
"Disarmed by self-discovery and loss of innocence."
Kind of reminds me of Lord of the Flies, same when I read the novel.
"the answers we all seek deep in the night but forget as soon as we wake up."
God, this is so awesome!
Love this part, the whole last paragraph, the most.
And, the tags. :)
You do yourself the best justice.
Thank you, I figured you hadn't read the synopsis. This was one of the first synopsis I ever wrote. Love the Lord of the Files reference.haha yes, tags. I often tell stories in them, sometimes there are hints for those who want to see.
Asghar wrote: "Thank you, I figured you hadn't read the synopsis. This was one of the first synopsis I ever wrote. Love the Lord of the Files reference.haha yes, tags. I often tell stories in them, sometimes th..."
I don't, mostly. Maybe it's better that I didn't. I like not knowing.
Beautifully written.
When you have so much to say.


